Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Улучшите плавность и точность высказывания: уберите повторы и заполнители («I do I comp»), используйте простое и корректное предложение. Добавьте небольшое расширение для конкретики (например, что и сколько времени вы учите). Работайте над произношением и интонацией для естественности.

Example: I'm currently a university student. Every evening I spend about two hours doing my coursework for my degree.

Suggestion: Сократите заполнители («uh», «umm») и исправьте грамматику: согласование времени и форма «part-time». Дайте ясный, компактный ответ и добавьте конкретный пример (что вы преподаёте, какие классы).

Example: Although I'm a student, I work part-time at a local school teaching English to primary school students.

Suggestion: Исправьте структуру предложения и согласование слов («interesting place for me to teach students»). Избегайте обрываний и добавьте причину, почему место хорошее (например, атмосфера, коллеги, условия).

Example: Yes, it's a great place to work because the atmosphere is friendly and supportive, and I enjoy helping children improve their English.

Suggestion: Уберите многочисленные «uh» и повторения. Используйте чёткое выражение желания и обоснуйте выбор конкретными причинами (поддержка коллег, академические возможности). Также исправьте лексику («supportive and motivating staff»).

Example: I'd like to work at a university as an English teacher because the staff are supportive and motivating, and it offers more opportunities for academic development.

Suggestion: Заканчивайте предложения чётко. Исправьте «enter the master degree» на «start a master's degree». Дайте связное, конкретное описание планов и временных рамок.

Example: Next year I plan to start a master's degree in English and then work as an English lecturer at a university.

× At the moment I am studying at university. Every evening I do I comp complete my home tasks from my university studies.

✓ At the moment I am studying at university. Every evening I complete my homework for my university studies.

The original contains incorrect word order and a wrong verb form: 'do I comp complete' is ungrammatical and 'home tasks' is awkward; 'homework' is the correct uncountable noun. Use present simple 'I complete' for habitual actions. Suggestion: simplify to 'Every evening I complete my homework.'

× Although I study at university, I uh, worked at school, uh, part in part time. I teach my lovely students, umm, I have worked in English.

✓ Although I study at university, I worked at a school part-time. I teach lovely students; I have worked as an English teacher.

Multiple tense and word choice problems: 'worked' is past tense which can be correct if referring to past employment, but 'part in part time' is wrong order; use 'part-time'. 'I teach my lovely students' is acceptable but 'my' is unnecessary; better 'I teach lovely students'. 'I have worked in English' is incorrect idiom; use 'I have worked as an English teacher' or 'I have worked in English education.' Ensure consistent and clear tense usage.

× Years school is intriguing place for me to teaching students. Honestly, I really enjoyed teaching my.

✓ The school is an intriguing place for me to teach students. Honestly, I really enjoy teaching them.

Problems: 'Years school' is incorrect — likely meant 'This school' or 'The school'. Missing articles and incorrect verb forms: 'to teaching' should be 'to teach'. 'I really enjoyed teaching my' is incomplete; 'my' must be followed by a noun or replaced with 'them'. Use present simple 'I really enjoy' if speaking about current feelings.

× Initially, I, uh, want uh, to, uh, I want to work at university as a teacher, uh, English teacher, uh, because uh, your staff are supportive motivator.

✓ Initially, I want to work at a university as an English teacher because the staff are supportive and motivating.

Redundant hesitations removed. Use 'a university' with article, 'English teacher' as noun phrase. 'Supportive motivator' is wrong collocation; use 'supportive and motivating' or 'supportive and motivating colleagues'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'staff are' is acceptable as collective plural, and 'motivating' is the correct adjective form.

× Next year I will enter the master degree and I would like to work at a university as an English teacher and.

✓ Next year I will enter the master's degree program, and I would like to work at a university as an English teacher.

Use correct noun phrase 'master's degree program' (possessive and countable). 'Enter the master degree' is ungrammatical. Remove trailing 'and'. Maintain future intention with 'will' for enrollment and 'would like' for desire. Suggestion: 'Next year I will start a master's degree program' is also natural.