Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm một số từ và làm câu mạch lạc hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít (flower → flowers), dùng đại từ và thì phù hợp (they're → it/they tùy sửa), và sửa từ sai (Petrol → Petals). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể theo sau với liên từ để câu trôi chảy. Ví dụ thực hành: sửa câu, nối ý bằng 'because' hoặc 'which' và giới hạn không quá 4-5 câu.

Example: Yes, I love flowers. I especially like sunflowers because their bright yellow petals make me feel cheerful and remind me of sunny days.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời rất lộn xộn, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Cần trả lời trực tiếp: nêu người, mô tả ngắn gọn về họ bằng một hoặc hai câu, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Tránh từ không đúng (Avicii, flavor, him) và sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự: Ai? Họ làm gì? Tại sao? Thực hành bằng cách viết lại câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, dùng thì hiện tại đơn.

Example: Yes, I do. My neighbour loves flowers and spends hours tending his rose bushes. He often gives me a few cut blooms, which I find very relaxing.

Suggestion: Trả lời thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều từ thừa/lỗi (Jazz, EDC). Cần bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể với kết nối hợp lý. Sử dụng danh sách ngắn các loài hoa và kết luận cảm xúc rõ ràng, không bỏ dang dở câu cuối.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, sunflowers and roses grow in many gardens, and seeing them makes me feel happy.

Suggestion: Ý chính khá rõ nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp, thứ tự từ và nối câu tự nhiên hơn. Dùng dạng -ing hoặc to-infinitive đúng (like taking photos / like to take photos), sửa 'dining lights' thành 'room' hoặc 'dining table' nếu ý đó, và nối ý bằng 'because' và 'which' để giải thích lợi ích cụ thể.

Example: Yes, I like taking photos of flowers at my dining table because they are beautiful and taking pictures helps me relax and reduce stress after school.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời hiểu được ý nhưng dùng từ sai và cấu trúc ngữ pháp kém (billboard, often flower). Nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng những ví dụ cụ thể về dịp tặng hoa: festivals, birthdays, funerals, graduations. Sử dụng danh sách ngắn và liên từ để rõ ràng.

Example: Yes, people often send flowers to friends and family for festivals, birthdays and graduations. Flowers are a common gift on special occasions.

× Yes, I love flower.

✓ Yes, I love flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural because the speaker refers to flowers in general. Use the plural form for countable nouns when speaking about them collectively (flowers). Suggestion: use 'flowers' when talking about the category in general.

× I especially like sunflower because they're bright yellow.

✓ I especially like sunflowers because they are bright yellow.

Use plural 'sunflowers' to match general reference and 'they are' instead of contraction mismatch. Also 'sunflower' as a common noun should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: 'I especially like sunflowers because they are bright yellow.'

× Petrol makes make me feel cheerful and they remind me of sunny day.

✓ Sunflowers make me feel cheerful and remind me of sunny days.

Original sentence has incorrect subject 'Petrol' and duplicate verb 'makes make'. The pronoun 'they' should refer to 'sunflowers' and 'sunny day' should be plural for general meaning. Suggestion: clarify subject and use correct verb forms and plurals.

× Yes I do my neighborhood is an Avicii who stole flavor he spent hour tending to him rose burst and a often give me cut bloom him partion stem from finding garden relaxing and seeing flowers present her homes.

✓ Yes, I do. In my neighborhood there is a man who loves flowers; he spends hours tending to his roses and often gives me a cut bloom from his garden because he finds gardening relaxing and enjoys seeing flowers in people's homes.

Many pronoun and word choices are incorrect: 'Avicii' and 'stole flavor' are wrong words; pronouns 'him/her' misused. Incorrect verb forms and missing articles. Suggested corrections replace wrong words with 'a man who loves flowers', use 'there is' for existence, 'spends hours', possessive 'his roses', and clear clause structure. Suggestion: use correct nouns and pronouns, proper tense forms, and add articles where needed.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live? Jazz I live a lot Flowers, for example, sunflower, rose, EDC It is very beautiful. It's made me feel happy and.

✓ Yes, I live in a place with many flowers, for example sunflowers and roses. It is very beautiful and it makes me feel happy.

Original has subject-verb and article errors: 'Jazz I live a lot Flowers' is ungrammatical. 'sunflower, rose' should be plural when speaking generally. 'It's made me feel happy' uses wrong tense; change to 'it makes me feel happy'. Suggestion: use clear sentence structure, plural nouns for general statements, and present tense for current feelings.

× Yes, I like take photo of flower in my dining lights because it is beautiful and it help me relaxing after go to school and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of flowers in my dining room because they are beautiful, and it helps me relax after going to school and reduces stress.

Gerund required after 'like' ('taking'). Use plural 'photos' and 'flowers' for general actions. 'Dining lights' is incorrect collocation; use 'dining room'. 'Help me relaxing' should be 'helps me relax'; after 'after' use verb+ing: 'after going to school'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it helps' and 'reduces stress'. Suggestion: use gerunds, correct collocations, and consistent subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, billboard in my country often flower to friend or family in festival or test or midterm.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to friends or family during festivals or exams.

Wrong words: 'billboard' is incorrect; likely 'people'. Use verb 'send' with object 'flowers'. Prepositions: use 'to friends or family' and 'during festivals or exams'. 'Test or midterm' better as 'exams'. Suggestion: choose appropriate nouns and prepositions and use plural forms for general statements.