Shoes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verbs and articles, and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and I usually buy a new pair about once a month. I do this because changing my shoes helps me refresh my overall style, and a new pair often inspires different outfits. As a result, shopping for shoes feels like completing my look.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use specific examples (e.g., trying sizes or checking color). Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Example: Yes, I have bought shoes online occasionally, but I usually prefer shopping in physical stores because I can try them on to check the fit and see the exact color. For example, last month I tried three sizes in a shop to find the most comfortable pair.

Suggestion: Provide a clear direct answer with specific figures, then give a brief reason and one example if needed. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and finish sentences fully.

Example: It depends on the brand, but I usually spend no more than 2,000 baht on a pair of shoes because I think that's reasonable for good quality. For instance, last month I bought running shoes for 1,800 baht that were durable and comfortable.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then support with one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “however.” Use correct tense and remove filler phrases like “you know.”

Example: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them every day without pain, especially for long walks or work. However, on special occasions I might choose fashionable shoes to match my outfit.

× So yes I do, I offend by shoe every month because I personally believe that like if I have made me choose, I can change my lifestyle of clothing as well.

✓ So yes, I do. I often buy shoes every month because I personally believe that if I choose to, I can change my clothing style as well.

Errors: 'offend' is incorrect form; correct word is 'often' (adverb). 'By shoe' is wrong preposition and singular/plural; use 'buy shoes'. The clause 'if I have made me choose' is ungrammatical; use 'if I choose to' to show a conditional decision. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use adverbs correctly, pluralize countable nouns, and use simple conditional 'if I choose to'. Suggestion tags: third person singular issue applies because original used wrong verb form 'offend' which looks like third-person verb but is wrong.

× Though yes sometime I buy the shoe all right, but I would prefer to buy the shoe in shop instead because I can try whether it fit my shoes or whether colors is suit with me.

✓ Yes, sometimes I buy shoes online, but I prefer to buy shoes in a shop instead because I can try whether they fit me or whether the colors suit me.

Errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'the shoe' should be plural 'shoes' and 'in shop' needs article 'in a shop' or 'in shops'; 'fit my shoes' is incorrect—use 'fit me'. 'whether colors is suit with me' has subject-verb agreement and preposition errors; correct to 'whether the colors suit me'. Use pronoun 'they' for shoes. Suggest using plural nouns for general statements and correct verb agreement.

× So I would prefer buying in shops.

✓ So I would prefer buying in shops.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; it uses 'would prefer' followed by a gerund 'buying', which is correct. No change needed. Explanation: 'would prefer' can be followed by a gerund to indicate a general preference. Included to confirm correctness and meet instruction to only correct listed error types.

× Thou is depends on the brand, but I usually prefer to buy the shoe with the price not more than 2000 baht because I think that this is a reasonable amount for buying the high quality shoes.

✓ That depends on the brand, but I usually prefer to buy shoes priced at no more than 2000 baht because I think that is a reasonable amount for buying high-quality shoes.

Errors: 'Thou is depends' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'That depends'. 'the shoe with the price not more than' is awkward; use 'shoes priced at no more than'. 'the high quality shoes' should be 'high-quality shoes' (hyphenate adjectival phrase) and no definite article needed in general. Suggestions: use correct subject ('that') for impersonal construction, use concise modifiers for price, and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× But I have some shoes with.

✓ But I do have some expensive shoes.

Original sentence is incomplete ('with' needs an object). Correct to a complete sentence that matches context; for example 'I do have some expensive shoes' or 'But I have some shoes that cost more.' Suggest always completing prepositional phrases by providing an object.

× So it's hard for me because I think that it depends on situation and on the day.

✓ It's hard for me because I think that it depends on the situation and on the day.

Missing article 'the' before 'situation'. Use 'it depends on the situation' for a specific context. Also 'it's' contraction is fine. Suggest ensuring articles are used before singular countable nouns when referring to a specific situation.

× But if I had to choose, I would prefer the comfortable shoes because I feel I think that I can wear it every day and it feel comfortable.

✓ But if I had to choose, I would prefer comfortable shoes because I think I can wear them every day and they feel comfortable.

Errors: 'the comfortable shoes' is unnatural in general preference—use 'comfortable shoes'. 'I feel I think' is redundant; use 'I think'. Pronoun agreement: 'it' refers to plural 'shoes' so use 'them' and 'they'. 'it feel comfortable' needs third-person plural verb 'feel' -> 'they feel comfortable'. Suggest simplify by removing redundancy and ensuring pronoun-antecedent agreement.

× You know, it's not hurt your.

✓ You know, they don't hurt you.

Errors: 'it's not hurt your' is ungrammatical pronoun and verb use. Use plural subject 'they' (shoes) with negative 'do not hurt' and object pronoun 'you'. Also correct verb form for present simple negative. Suggest matching subject number and using proper object pronouns.