Chatting— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; tránh lặp từ và tiếng lấp (uh). Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau bởi một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và súc tích. Ví dụ: dùng thì đúng (I spend / I have to focus on my work), sửa collocation (tiring -> talk to them when I'm tired) và nối ý mượt bằng liên từ như "so" hoặc "which".

Example: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I usually talk to them every day after work because I need to focus during the day, so chatting helps me relax and have fun.

Suggestion: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu chi tiết cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp (will relate -> usually relates, each person have -> has) và dùng từ chính xác (talking about -> talk about, sharing -> share). Tránh câu dài lủng củng; dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" đúng chỗ.

Example: It depends on the day, but we usually talk about work and personal experiences because everyone shares what happened during their day, which helps us support each other.

Suggestion: Rõ ràng hơn khi trình bày lựa chọn và lý do; sửa ngữ pháp (who's sharing -> who is sharing, relate -> relates, privacy -> private, it's mean -> it means). Dùng cấu trúc điều kiện đơn giản và liên từ để kết nối lý do: "If... then..." hoặc "because".

Example: It depends on the situation. If the topic is private, I prefer to talk one-on-one, but if it's something general, I prefer group chats because everyone feels comfortable joining in.

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp và word choice: "see their emotions" thay cho "see their emotional", "adjust my attitude appropriately" thay cho "adjust appropriately attitude", bỏ từ thừa (Mr.). Nên nói rõ ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào và vì sao gặp mặt trực tiếp tốt hơn để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Example: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their emotions and adjust my attitude accordingly, which helps me respond appropriately and reduces misunderstandings.

Suggestion: Cần câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chuẩn. Sửa ý mơ hồ: "condition person generously" không rõ nghĩa — có thể là "a calm and generous person". Câu về bất đồng nặng cần rõ ràng hơn (If we have a serious disagreement...). Tránh câu kết không hoàn chỉnh.

Example: I usually avoid arguments because I'm a calm and generous person. However, if a serious disagreement occurs between me and a friend, it could be hard to forgive and might damage the relationship.

× I've spent my time with my friends every day but not much because I have to focus on my working and uh, whenever I tiring to them, it's make me feel more relaxed and make me have more fun.

✓ I spend time with my friends every day but not much because I have to focus on my work, and whenever I talk to them, it makes me feel more relaxed and have more fun.

Student used present perfect 'I've spent' incorrectly with 'every day' and inconsistent verb forms. Use simple present 'I spend' for habitual actions. 'my working' is incorrect; use noun 'my work'. 'whenever I tiring to them' mixes adjective with verb; correct is 'whenever I talk to them'. 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject. Suggestions: use simple present for routines, use correct noun forms (work), and ensure subject-verb agreement (it makes).

× It's up to each day, but normally is will relate to work because each person have their personal story.

✓ It depends on the day, but normally it will relate to work because each person has their own personal story.

'It's up to each day' is unnatural; use 'it depends on the day'. 'is will relate' mixes forms; use 'it will relate' or 'it relates'. 'each person have' is subject-verb disagreement; singular 'person' needs 'has'. Also 'their personal story' is acceptable but 'their own personal story' is clearer. Suggestions: use 'depends on' for variability, keep verb forms consistent, and match singular subjects with singular verbs.

× So whenever they want to talking or chatting about they will sharing about what the day they feel what they have been through.

✓ So whenever they want to talk or chat about something, they will share how they felt and what they have been through that day.

Incorrect verb forms: 'want to talking' should be 'want to talk'; 'will sharing' should be 'will share'. Pronoun placement 'they will sharing about what the day they feel' is confusing. Use clear clauses: 'share how they felt' and 'what they have been through'. Suggestions: use infinitive after 'want to', use base verb after 'will', and order clauses logically.

× So it will help us sharing together and more.

✓ So it helps us share experiences and feel closer.

Awkward structure 'help us sharing together and more'. After 'help' use base verb 'share'. 'and more' is vague; replace with specific result 'feel closer'. Suggestions: use correct verb form after 'help' and be specific about outcomes.

× It's up to the situations and the story who's sharing.

✓ It depends on the situation and on who is sharing the story.

Mix of plural 'situations' with 'it's up to' is awkward; use singular 'situation' or rephrase 'depends on the situation'. 'the story who's sharing' is incorrect; 'who is sharing the story' clarifies subject. Suggestions: use 'depend on' constructions and proper clause order.

× If it relate to something privacy, I think we would talk with only one friend face to face, but if it can sharing to the group, it's mean that they will feel more comfortable when we talk about that.

✓ If it relates to a private matter, I think we would talk with only one friend face to face, but if it can be shared with the group, it means they will feel more comfortable when we talk about it.

'relate' needs third-person 'relates'. 'something privacy' should be 'a private matter'. 'it can sharing' incorrect passive/gerund; use 'can be shared'. 'it's mean' should be 'it means'. 'talk about that' better as 'talk about it'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms for third-person, use proper nouns/adjectives, and correct passive constructions.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because whenever I see their emotional I can adjust appropriately attitude and give a suitable statement and minimize Mr. misunderstanding.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I see their emotions I can adjust my attitude appropriately, give a suitable response, and minimize misunderstandings.

'see their emotional' uses adjective instead of noun; use 'emotions'. 'adjust appropriately attitude' word order is incorrect; use 'adjust my attitude appropriately'. 'suitable statement' is awkward; use 'suitable response'. 'Mr. misunderstanding' likely typo; use 'misunderstandings'. Suggestions: use correct noun/adjective forms, proper word order for adverbs, and choose natural collocations like 'give a response'.

× Normally I do not participate in arguments.

✓ Normally I do not participate in arguments.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses simple present appropriately for habitual action. No change needed.

× I'm a kind of a condition person generously and avoid argument as much as possible.

✓ I'm the kind of person who is calm and generous and avoids arguments as much as possible.

Original has unclear 'condition person generously'. Likely intended traits: 'calm' and 'generous'. Use relative clause 'the kind of person who is...' and third-person singular verb 'avoids' to agree with 'person'. 'argument' should be plural 'arguments'. Suggestions: use clear adjectives, correct article 'the', and subject-verb agreement.

× If it's have the agreement happen between me and my friends, it will be a serious problem that I cannot forgive.

✓ If an argument occurs between me and my friends, it would be a serious problem that I might not be able to forgive.

'it's have the agreement happen' is ungrammatical. Use 'If an argument occurs' or 'If there is an argument'. 'agreement' is opposite of intended 'argument'. Use conditional 'would' for hypothetical and 'might not be able to forgive' for nuance. Suggestions: use correct noun (argument), proper 'there is/occurs' constructions, and appropriate conditional modal verbs.