Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and use a clear topic sentence. Correct grammar (verb tenses, articles), avoid repetition, and provide one or two specific details about your hobby. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to explain why you enjoy it.

Example: Yes. I enjoy riding a bicycle and I have done so since childhood. I ride regularly because it keeps me fit and lets me explore nearby parks and streets. For example, I often cycle to the riverside on weekends with my friends.

Suggestion: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence. Fix grammar (past tense, articles, word order) and reduce repetition. Provide a specific example or memory and use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I loved riding my bicycle with friends. We often explored nearby neighborhoods and parks, so I learned a lot about my town. For example, we once spent an afternoon discovering a small lake two miles from home.

Suggestion: Give a clear, focused answer without unrelated phrases. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Say when you started, what you do (read, collect books), and a reason or specific detail. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Example: Yes, I have loved reading since I was a child. I collect books and buy new ones regularly because I enjoy different stories and learning new things. In my free time I usually read novels or short essays before bed.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar (possessives, subject-verb agreement). Mention who shares the hobby and give a specific example of how you share it (e.g., buying or discussing books). Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to explain the relationship.

Example: Yes, my father also enjoys reading, so we share that hobby. He often buys books for me and we discuss what we read, which encourages me to read more.

× Yes, I have great passion towards them, towards riding bicycle and it was from my childhood then I love, I am fond of bicycle and it was a it was very passionate for me.

✓ Yes, I have a great passion for them, especially for riding a bicycle; it has been a passion since my childhood, and I am very fond of cycling.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'towards' (use 'for' with 'passion'), missing articles ('a great passion', 'a bicycle'), awkward tense/structure ('it was from my childhood' should be present perfect 'has been since my childhood'), redundancy and word choice ('it was very passionate for me' is incorrect; use 'I was very passionate' or 'it has been a passion'). Suggestion: use 'passion for' + noun, include articles, use present perfect to express an action/state continuing from the past to present, and simplify redundant phrases.

× Yes, riding bike cycle is my hobby since when I childhood.

✓ Yes, riding a bicycle has been my hobby since childhood.

Errors: wrong word order and missing article ('a bicycle') and incorrect noun choice 'bike cycle' (redundant). Also 'is my hobby since when I childhood' mixes present simple with a time reference starting in the past; use present perfect 'has been' with 'since childhood'. Suggestion: use 'riding a bicycle has been my hobby since childhood.'

× In the childhood I I go with my my friends and to to explore other areas through a bicycle.

✓ In my childhood I used to go with my friends to explore other areas by bicycle.

Errors: duplicate words ('I I', 'my my', 'to to'), incorrect article 'In the childhood' (should be 'In my childhood' or 'As a child'), wrong verb tense for habitual past action (use 'used to'), incorrect preposition 'through' (use 'by' or 'on' a bicycle). Suggestion: remove duplicates, use 'used to' for past habits, and 'by bicycle' or 'on a bicycle'.

× And I always invited my group of friends to ride a bicycle and I ride bike.

✓ I always invited my group of friends to ride bicycles with me, and I rode a bike.

Errors: tense inconsistency ('always invited' is past but 'I ride bike' is present), missing article 'a bike' and plural 'bicycles' when inviting a group, and awkward phrasing. Suggestion: keep past tense for past habits: 'I always invited my friends to ride bicycles with me, and I rode a bike.'

× Yes hello I have AI have hope you're feeling since my childhood and free time.

✓ Yes, I have had this hobby since my childhood and in my free time.

Errors: garbled words ('AI have hope you're feeling' makes no sense), incorrect tense ('have had' expresses continuation from past to present), missing articles and prepositions. Suggestion: remove irrelevant phrases, use 'I have had this hobby since my childhood and in my free time.'

× I love reading and I collect all the books from stores and I buy it and I read it when it free time.

✓ I love reading; I collect books from stores, I buy them, and I read them in my free time.

Errors: incorrect pronoun agreement ('books' plural but 'it' singular), missing articles ('in my free time'), and repetition. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use 'in my free time.'

× Yes my my father also have fond of reading books so they so he always purchase their books for me and send it to me.

✓ Yes, my father is also fond of reading books, so he always buys books for me and sends them to me.

Errors: duplicate 'my my', subject-verb agreement ('father have' should be 'father is' or 'father has'), incorrect pronouns ('they/ their' refer to people not books; use 'them' for books), verb forms ('purchase' is less natural than 'buys', 'send it' should be 'sends them'). Suggestion: fix subject-verb agreement, use appropriate pronouns for objects (them), and use natural verbs: 'he always buys books for me and sends them.'

× So I think I have my passion.

✓ So I think I have found my passion.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'I have my passion' is unnatural; use 'found my passion' or 'a passion for it.' Suggestion: use idiomatic expression 'found my passion' or 'I am passionate about it.'