Hobby— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer the question first, then give one clear example with specific details. Avoid repetition and filler words (e.g., "oh, actually"). Use correct collocations (e.g., "I enjoy taking walks" not "walking in the strolling"). Aim for 2–3 sentences with a topic sentence and one supporting detail.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking walks around my neighborhood because it helps me relax and discover new shops and parks. For example, I try to walk for thirty minutes each evening to clear my mind and get some light exercise.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific details (age, activity, duration, feelings). Reduce fillers and correct grammar ("I trained in gymnastics" not "training with a gymnastic"). Keep within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Example: Yes, I did. When I was six and seven, I trained in gymnastics because I loved the physical challenge and performing routines. I practiced for several years at a local club, which helped me build strength and confidence.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give concise supporting details: name the hobby, how long you've done it, and how you practice it now. Remove irrelevant phrases and fix grammar ("I have trained in gymnastics since childhood"; "I still practice at home"). Use linking words such as "so" or "however" to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I have. I have trained in gymnastics since childhood and enjoyed it for many years. Although I no longer attend a club, I still practice basic routines and exercises at home to keep fit.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, name the shared hobby clearly (e.g., "strolling" or "walking"), and explain briefly how you share it (when, where, frequency). Avoid repetition and unclear words. Use a linking phrase like "for example" or "we often".

Example: Yes, I share a hobby with my mother: we both enjoy strolling around the neighborhood. For example, we often walk together on weekend mornings to chat and visit local cafés.

× Oh, actually he's of course, I have so many hobbies because I'm kind of person who has interest on everything.

✓ Oh, actually, of course I have so many hobbies because I'm the kind of person who is interested in everything.

Pronoun 'he's' is incorrect; speaker refers to themselves so use 'I'. Also 'kind of person who has interest on everything' is ungrammatical: correct is 'the kind of person who is interested in everything'. Use 'interested in' not 'interest on'. Ensure definite article 'the' before 'kind of person'. Suggestion: Say 'I am the kind of person who is interested in everything.'

× And I can take an example, my hobby is walking in the strolling and 'cause this is really interesting for me and I can enjoy from it and I always want to do that.

✓ For example, my hobby is strolling because this is really interesting for me, I enjoy it, and I always want to do it.

Phrase 'walking in the strolling' is incorrect; use 'strolling' or 'going for walks'. 'Enjoy from it' is ungrammatical; correct verb pattern is 'enjoy it' (no preposition). Use 'because' not ''cause' in formal speech and replace 'I always want to do that' with 'I always want to do it' for pronoun reference. Suggestion: 'For example, my hobby is strolling because I find it interesting and I enjoy it.'

× Oh, actually not. Oh, actually gone are these days when I was a child or I was six or seven years old and I have so many hobbies.

✓ Oh, actually no. Those days are gone; when I was a child, when I was six or seven years old, I had many hobbies.

Tense and word order are confused. Use 'Those days are gone' to refer to the past generally. When describing past habitual activities, use past tense 'I had many hobbies' not present 'I have'. Also 'oh, actually not' is awkward; 'oh, actually no' is better. Suggestion: 'Those days are gone; when I was six or seven, I had many hobbies.'

× And my favorite one was training with a gymnastic because the gymnastics was my was the one of my favorite thing ever.

✓ My favorite one was training in gymnastics because gymnastics was one of my favorite activities ever.

Article misuse: 'a gymnastic' is incorrect; use 'gymnastics' (uncountable activity). Remove duplicate 'was my was'. Use 'one of my favorite activities' rather than 'one of my favorite thing'. Suggestion: 'My favorite hobby was training in gymnastics.'

× And I always want to train with that. And I trained with gymnastics for so many years in my childhood.

✓ I always wanted to train in it, and I trained in gymnastics for many years in my childhood.

Mixing present 'always want' with past context; change to past 'wanted'. Use 'train in gymnastics' rather than 'train with gymnastics'. 'So many years' is colloquial but acceptable; 'many years' is clearer. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

× Oh, journalists speaking, yes, of course I have a hobby that I have had since my childhood.

✓ Oh, frankly speaking, yes, of course I have a hobby that I have had since childhood.

'Journalists speaking' is incorrect phrase; likely intended 'frankly speaking'. 'Since my childhood' is acceptable, but 'since childhood' is more natural. Tense 'have had since childhood' (present perfect) is correct to show continuation. Suggestion: Use 'frankly speaking' and keep present perfect to indicate an ongoing hobby.

× Actually, it's training with gymnastics 'cause I have chosen this activity as my hobby since my childhood.

✓ Actually, it's training in gymnastics because I chose this activity as my hobby in childhood.

Use 'training in gymnastics' rather than 'training with gymnastics'. 'Since my childhood' with 'have chosen' is awkward; better to use simple past 'I chose' or present perfect 'I have liked'. Maintain consistent tense. Suggestion: 'I chose this activity as my hobby when I was a child.'

× That's why I always try to train with that, because in my childhood I always train with this person.

✓ That's why I always try to train in it, because in my childhood I always trained in it with a coach/person.

Pronoun 'that' is acceptable but 'train with that' is odd; use 'train in it'. Also tense: 'I always train' should be past 'I always trained' when referring to childhood. 'This person' is vague; specify 'a coach' or 'a trainer' if intended. Suggestion: Keep pronouns clear and match tense to time reference.

× Still, I try to train with gymnastic at my home, but I don't go the club.

✓ Still, I try to practice gymnastics at home, but I don't go to the club.

Use 'practice gymnastics' or 'train in gymnastics' rather than 'train with gymnastic'. Use 'at home' not 'at my home' (both possible but 'at home' is natural). Add preposition 'to' before 'the club'. Suggestion: 'I practice gymnastics at home, but I don't go to the club.'

× Oh, frankly speaking, yes, of course, I have a same hobby as my family members umm, which is my mom really likes and her hobby is the Sterling and it's, uh, also my favorite hobby.

✓ Oh, frankly speaking, yes, of course I have the same hobby as my family members: my mom really likes it, and her hobby is strolling, which is also my favorite hobby.

Use 'the same' not 'a same'. Sentence structure is confusing; separate ideas and use a colon or conjunction. 'The Sterling' is incorrect — likely 'strolling'. Use 'likes it' to refer to the hobby. Suggestion: 'I have the same hobby as my family; my mom likes strolling, and I do too.'

× Also, I have chosen Sterling is my favorite hobby is my mom and we always want to stroll the streets together with my mom and I always try to stroll.

✓ Also, I have chosen strolling as my favorite hobby like my mom, and we always want to stroll the streets together; I always try to go for a stroll with her.

Sentence has multiple errors: 'have chosen Sterling is my favorite hobby is my mom' is ungrammatical. Use 'chosen strolling as my favorite hobby like my mom'. 'Want to stroll the streets together with my mom' is repetitive; simplify. Use consistent verb forms: 'we want' (present) is fine for habitual actions. Suggestion: 'I chose strolling as my favorite hobby, like my mom, and we often stroll the streets together.'