Part 1
Examiner
Do you like reading?
Candidate
To be honest, I'm not really like reading because when I read I often get tired. Umm, I'm not at all interested in I. I found it hard to concentrate on a book.
Examiner
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidate
I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, when I am commuting I can.
Examiner
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidate
I need to be very careful when I am taking a test or failing in a sign up form because more mistake can cause me more.
Examiner
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidate
I prefer scanning because I often read for information rather than enjoyment. Scanning help me find the key points quickly and save time.
Do you like reading?
Score: 46.0Suggestion: 句子有语法错误和表达不自然之处,需要改进语法(如动词形式和代词使用)并使回答更简洁连贯。可以先直接回答问题,然后给出一到两句具体原因或例子,避免重复和无意义的填充词(如“Umm”)。建议使用正确的动词形式(e.g. “I don't really like reading”),并用连接词(because / so)把观点和原因衔接起来。
Example: I don't really enjoy reading because I often get tired when I read and find it hard to concentrate on books. For example, after a long day at work I prefer listening to podcasts rather than reading physical books.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 回答总体清晰但不完整。有一个未完成的句子(“when I am commuting I can.”),应补充具体行动或好处。可以在主题句后用一至两句具体细节支持,并用连接词(for example / because / so)使表达完整。注意时态和句子完整性。
Example: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, when I'm commuting I can quickly open an article on my phone and save it for later, which helps me make use of short travel times.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: 句子语法和词汇使用有严重问题,且表达不清。需要先直接回答两个情境(何时需要细读、何时不用),然后用明确具体的原因支持。修正语法错误(e.g. “when I'm taking a test or filling in a sign-up form”),并完整说明后果。避免模糊短语“more mistake can cause me more”。
Example: I need to read very carefully when I'm taking a test or filling in a sign-up form because small mistakes can lead to lost marks or problems with my account. Conversely, I don't read carefully when browsing social media posts or headlines, since they are just for quick information.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答清晰且相关,但有小的语法错误(动词形式),并可以加一两个具体例子使内容更具体。使用连接词(because / so)已经很好,注意动词三单形式(scanning helps)。
Example: I prefer scanning because I usually read to get information rather than for enjoyment. Scanning helps me find key points quickly and save time; for example, when researching for a class I skim articles to pick out useful facts and then read only the most relevant sections.
× To be honest, I'm not really like reading because when I read I often get tired.
✓ To be honest, I don't really like reading because when I read I often get tired.
句子中使用了“I'm not really like reading”,這是錯誤的形容詞/副詞用法。英語中“like”作為動詞時不能與“be”動詞連用(不能說“I am not like reading”來表示不喜歡),應使用助動詞 do/does 加動詞原形來構成否定:I don't like reading。建議:用一般現在時的否定結構“do not/does not + 動詞原形”。
× Umm, I'm not at all interested in I.
✓ Umm, I'm not at all interested in it.
原句“I am not at all interested in I”中代詞使用不當(屬於形容詞/副詞類錯誤影響表達)。介詞in 之後應接賓語,用主格代詞“I”不合語法,正確應使用賓格代詞 it 或/and 在此語境可用“reading”來具體化:"I'm not at all interested in reading." 建議:介詞後用賓格或名詞短語。
× I found it hard to concentrate on a book.
✓ I find it hard to concentrate on a book.
根據上下文學生在說一般習慣或傾向,應使用一般現在時而非過去時。原句用過去時“found”會讓人誤以為是過去一次的經驗。建議:表習慣或一般事實用一般現在時(find)。
× I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, when I am commuting I can.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, when I am commuting I can read on my phone.
原句“For example, when I am commuting I can.”是句子不完整,缺少主要動詞和賓語,導致句子結構錯誤(也屬於時態與句子結構問題)。根據現在習慣需用一般現在進行或簡單現在描述:"when I am commuting I can read on my phone." 建議:說明能做什麼時使用完整動詞短語。
× I need to be very careful when I am taking a test or failing in a sign up form because more mistake can cause me more.
✓ I need to be very careful when I am taking a test or filling in a sign-up form because more mistakes can cause me more problems.
原句有多處錯誤:"failing in a sign up form" 應為 "filling in a sign-up form"(動詞拼寫錯誤);"more mistake" 應為複數 mistakes;"can cause me more" 不完整,應具體說明造成更多什麼(problems)。句子時態用現在進行描述正在做的事是可以的,但關鍵是單詞形式和句子完整性。建議:檢查動詞拼寫與名詞單複數,並完整表達結果。
× I prefer scanning because I often read for information rather than enjoyment. Scanning help me find the key points quickly and save time.
✓ I prefer scanning because I often read for information rather than enjoyment. Scanning helps me find the key points quickly and save time.
第二句“Scanning help me...”中主語是單數動名詞短語 Scanning,需用第三人稱單數動詞形式 helps,因此缺少 -s。這是動詞與主語形式一致的問題(動詞變化)。建議:當主語為單數或第三人稱時動詞加 -s。