Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more natural, correct grammar and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with brief details. Use correct verb forms, countable/uncountable nouns and articles. Avoid redundant phrases and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I’m an avid reader because books give me knowledge about many subjects. For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article called “Victoria” that taught me a lot about that historical era.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct collocations and grammar, and use linking words to connect reasons. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., tactile, distractions) and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it’s more comfortable and I enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a newspaper. Also, there are fewer distractions than when I read on a digital device, so I can concentrate better.

Suggestion: Make the contrast clearer with correct grammar and more specific examples. Use linking words like 'when' and 'whereas' and correct verb forms (e.g., 'when I am preparing'). Avoid vague phrases like 'something news'.

Example: I read carefully when the material is official, such as legal documents or study materials while I am preparing for a competitive exam. Whereas for everyday things like short news articles or simple instructions I usually skim and don’t focus on every detail.

Suggestion: Clarify your meaning and fix grammar and word choice. Explain one clear reason with a brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'small too small contact'.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand subtle points and remember information for a long time. In contrast, scanning is useful only when I need to find a single fact quickly.

× Definitely yes.

✓ Definitely.

The student used 'yes' redundantly with 'definitely'. 'Definitely' alone adequately answers the question. Use one adverbial response to be concise and natural.

× Being a book bomb I like to read a lot because it provide me a knowledge about the various subject.

✓ Being a bookworm, I like to read a lot because it provides me with knowledge about various subjects.

Multiple issues: 'book bomb' is a wrong word choice (should be 'bookworm'). Missing comma after introductory phrase. Subject-verb agreement: 'provide' should be 'provides' because the singular subject 'it' refers to reading or the activity; better to use 'it provides' or rephrase 'reading provides'. 'a knowledge' is uncountable so use 'knowledge' without article and add preposition 'with'. 'the various subject' should be plural 'various subjects' and no definite article. Suggestions: use correct vocabulary, add comma after introductory phrase, ensure subject-verb agreement, and treat 'knowledge' as uncountable.

× For example couple of week ago I read about one article which name is Victoria which provide the knowledge about my historical period.

✓ For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article called 'Victoria' that provided information about my historical period.

Errors: missing comma after 'For example'. 'couple of week ago' should be 'a couple of weeks ago' (plural and article). 'read about one article' is awkward; use 'read an article'. 'which name is Victoria' should be 'called 'Victoria'' or 'which is titled Victoria'. Verb tense/agreement: 'which provide' should be 'that provided' to match past tense 'read'. 'provide the knowledge about' is unnatural; use 'provided information about'. Suggestions: use articles correctly, pluralize time expressions, choose natural collocations ('read an article called'), and match past tense throughout.

× Definitely, I like to paper reading because it is the more comfortable.

✓ Definitely, I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable.

Problems: 'like to paper reading' is ungrammatical—use 'prefer reading on paper' or 'like reading on paper'. 'the more comfortable' incorrectly uses definite article and comparative without a comparison—use 'more comfortable'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' when comparing formats and correct prepositional phrase 'on paper'.

× Apart from this, I like to feeling tactile of holding a holding a newspaper in my hand.

✓ Also, I like the tactile feeling of holding a newspaper in my hand.

Errors: 'Apart from this' is formal and awkward here—'Also' is more natural. 'I like to feeling' is incorrect; use 'I like the tactile feeling' or 'I like feeling' plus gerund. Repeated 'a holding a' is duplication. Fix word order: 'tactile feeling of holding a newspaper in my hand.' Suggestion: remove repetition and use correct noun phrase and prepositions.

× Moreover, there are fewer distraction as compared to digital reading.

✓ Moreover, there are fewer distractions compared to digital reading.

Error: 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to agree with 'fewer'. Also 'as compared to' is wordy—use 'compared to' or 'than'. Suggestion: ensure plural form with 'fewer' and simplify the comparative phrase.

× To be honest, I read carefully when I read about something official and document as well as when I preparing a competitive exam.

✓ To be honest, I read carefully when I read something official, such as a document, and when I am preparing for a competitive exam.

Problems: 'about something official and document' is ungrammatical—use 'something official, such as a document'. 'when I preparing' lacks auxiliary 'am' and missing preposition 'for' in 'preparing for a competitive exam'. Suggestion: include correct auxiliary verbs for continuous tense and use appropriate prepositions.

× On the other hand, I pay a less attention when I read something news as well as the instruction, so that's why I do not pay more attention.

✓ On the other hand, I pay less attention when I read the news or instructions, so I do not pay much attention then.

Errors: 'a less attention' should be 'less attention' (no article). 'something news' is incorrect—use 'the news'. 'as well as the instruction' should be 'or instructions' (plural). Redundant 'so that's why I do not pay more attention' is wordy—use 'so I do not pay much attention then.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, choose correct nouns ('news' uncountable), and avoid redundancy.

× To be honest I prefer to detail reading because it provide me a knowledge about a small too small contact.

✓ To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because it provides me with knowledge about a small, even very small, context.

Errors: 'prefer to detail reading' should be 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer to read in detail'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it provide' should be 'it provides'. 'a knowledge' incorrect—use 'knowledge' with no article and add preposition 'with'. 'contact' is wrong word; likely 'context'. 'too small' awkwardly placed—use 'small, even very small, context' or 'a very small context.' Suggestion: correct noun forms, verb agreement, and choose correct vocabulary ('context').

× Apart from this, I can remember any kind of thing for a long time which is not which is not possible in a scanning reading.

✓ Also, I can remember many kinds of things for a long time, which is not possible with skimming or scanning.

Issues: 'any kind of thing' is unnatural—use 'many kinds of things' or 'many things'. Repetition 'which is not which is not' must be removed. 'a scanning reading' incorrect; say 'skimming or scanning' or 'scanning reading' is unidiomatic. Use 'with' rather than 'in' for method. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use natural collocations ('remember many things', 'skimming or scanning'), and correct prepositions.