Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more grammatically correct, concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Fix verb forms and word order (e.g., ‘I usually walk to university’). Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually walk to university every day, and I also take short walks in the park in the morning or evening when the weather is good, because it helps me relax and get some exercise.

Suggestion: Clarify the time reference and meaning, use past tense consistently, and avoid hesitation. Begin with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No) and then give a clear memory with specific details and linking words. Remove unclear words like ‘shy’ if you meant ‘young’.

Example: Yes. When I was a child my friends often took me to the park to jog or walk with them, and I remember enjoying those group exercises because they made me feel more confident and active.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear reason, then add one or two specific supporting points using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘parks are a good environment’, ‘they are convenient’). Avoid filler words and repeat ideas more concisely.

Example: People like to walk in parks because parks offer a pleasant and safe environment for exercise. For example, they usually have trees, walking paths and fewer cars, so people can walk comfortably and often exercise together.

Suggestion: Use the correct conditional form (‘If I had the chance’) and state the preference clearly as a topic sentence. Then give a brief specific reason and define terms (e.g., what you consider a long walk). Keep it under five sentences.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the local park near my house. I consider a long walk to be about 10 kilometres, and the park’s trails are suitable because they are peaceful and well maintained.

Suggestion: Answer with a full, grammatically correct sentence starting with the time reference, then give specific details. Use past tense consistently and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘walked’, ‘around 5 kilometres’, ‘campus has many trees’). Avoid vague words like ‘development’ and fix word order.

Example: I went for a walk on my university campus yesterday with a friend, and we walked about five kilometres. The campus has many trees and pleasant paths, so the weather made it ideal for walking.

× Yes, I do it usually work to study in the university and in the morning or in the evening if the weather is good I will walk in the park.

✓ Yes, I usually walk to university for study, and in the morning or in the evening if the weather is good I walk in the park.

Original uses incorrect verb forms and extra words ('do it usually work') and inconsistent future 'will' for habitual actions. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I usually walk to university' and 'I walk in the park' for regular activities. Remove unnecessary 'it' and 'work'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× When I was shy, my pal and away took me to the some exercise or go to the park and just jogging or walking with with them.

✓ When I was young, my pals and I took walks or went to the park and just jogged or walked with them.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'shy' likely intended 'young'; 'pal and away' is incorrect; mix of infinitives and forms. Use past simple consistently for past events: 'took', 'went', 'jogged'. Use plural 'pals' and subject pronoun 'I'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× And I think this uh, mem memory that I can't remember when I was shy.

✓ I think this memory remains, but I cannot clearly remember when I was young.

Sentence is unclear and uses contradictory phrases ('memory that I can't remember'). Replace with clear structure: state that the memory exists but details are unclear. Also replace 'shy' with 'young' if referring to childhood. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think the park is the good environment for exercise or walking because, uh, when people go to the park, it's have many people that they exercise together and I think the park is the. Convenient for them because it's don't have the car in the park so they can walk by comfortable.

✓ I think the park is a good environment for exercise or walking because when people go to the park there are many people exercising together. I also think the park is convenient for them because there are no cars in the park so they can walk comfortably.

Errors: article use ('the good' -> 'a good'), incorrect 'it's have' -> 'there are', unnecessary 'that they', wrong punctuation and structure, 'it's don't have the car' -> 'there are no cars', and adverb 'comfortable' should be 'comfortably'. Use correct articles, subject-verb agreement, and adverb form. Grammar problem type ID:13

× If I have a Shank, I will walk in the local park that near my house for the long walk.

✓ If I have a chance, I will take a long walk in the local park near my house.

Spelling error 'Shank'->'chance' and awkward structure 'walk in the local park that near my house'. Use 'take a long walk' and position 'near my house' after 'park'. Conditional 'If I have a chance, I will' is correct future form. Grammar problem type ID:7

× For me long walk is about 10 kilometers and I think there's enough for work in the local park.

✓ For me a long walk is about 10 kilometers, and I think that distance is fine for walking in the local park.

Missing article 'a long walk'; awkward 'there's enough for work' -> 'that distance is fine for walking'. Use appropriate quantifier and noun collocation ('fine for walking'). Grammar problem type ID:14

× A walk in the university yesterday with my friend and we work around 5 kilometer.

✓ I took a walk on the university campus yesterday with my friend and we walked around 5 kilometers.

Original first clause lacks a main verb. Use past simple 'I took a walk' and 'walked' for the distance. Also pluralize 'kilometers'. Grammar problem type ID:23

× My university has a good development and is have many trees that so whole and the weather is very good for walking.

✓ My university has good facilities and many trees, and the weather is very good for walking.

'a good development' is unnatural; use 'good facilities' or 'well-developed'. 'is have' is incorrect—use 'has'. 'that so whole' is unclear and removed. Fix article use and choose correct verbs and nouns for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22