Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear, direct topic sentence, correct grammar and avoid extra words. Use one or two linking words to add a specific reason and a brief example. Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

Example: My favourite food is fried rice. I enjoy it because the mixture of vegetables and spices creates a comforting flavour. For example, my family cooks it on weekends, and the smell always reminds me of happy times together.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and sentence structure, avoid filler sounds, and be careful with word choice (e.g., 'for six' was likely wrong). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or an example using linking words.

Example: When I was young, I liked fried chicken. My family often went to KFC because the food was tasty and affordable for a family meal.

Suggestion: Answer the question asked (about different times of year). Avoid repeating previous answers. Use linking words (for example, in summer/in winter) and give specific seasonal examples. Keep grammar consistent.

Example: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I eat lighter meals like salads and grilled fish.

Suggestion: Answer clearly whether your preference changed, use correct tense and clearer vocabulary to describe the new dish and why you like it. Include a short reason and one specific detail or memory. Avoid hesitation sounds.

Example: Yes, my favourite food has changed. Recently my mother cooked ikan patin tempoyak, a sour fish stew, and I loved the tangy flavour and rich aroma. Since then I often ask her to make it for family dinners.

× My favorite food is my money, my man Fried rice equips uh to make and very tasty.

✓ My favorite food is fried rice because my husband makes it and it is very tasty.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and word order ('my money, my man') and an incorrect verb 'equips' for making. Replace 'my money, my man' with 'my husband' or 'my partner' for clarity; use 'makes it' to indicate who prepares the dish; include 'because' to give the reason; ensure sentence is coherent and grammatically correct.

× Tasty and I love it because the mix of vegetable and spices bring back many happy family memories.

✓ It is tasty, and I love it because the mix of vegetables and spices brings back many happy family memories.

Plural noun 'vegetable' should be 'vegetables' and subject-verb agreement requires 'brings' not 'bring' because the subject 'the mix' is singular. Also combine fragments into a full sentence and add 'It is' for completeness.

× The food I like when I were young is fried chicken.

✓ The food I liked when I was young was fried chicken.

The sentence refers to past time, so use past tense 'liked' and 'was' rather than present 'like' and incorrect past 'were'; 'were' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires 'was' in past simple.

× I, my family always go to KFC to eat uh, fried chicken because uh, KFC have umm, affordable price, uh, for sex, for family.

✓ My family and I always went to KFC to eat fried chicken because KFC had affordable prices for the whole family.

Pronoun order should be 'My family and I' not 'I, my family'. The past tense context requires 'went' and 'had'. 'Have' should be 'had' for past. 'Price' should be plural 'prices' or 'an affordable price'; 'for sex' is incorrect and likely intended 'for six' or 'for the whole' — corrected to 'for the whole family' to match context.

× When I was young, I like a fried chicken, especially for KFC.

✓ When I was young, I liked fried chicken, especially KFC's.

Referencing the past requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Remove unnecessary article 'a' before 'fried chicken'. 'Especially for KFC' is awkward; better 'especially KFC's' or 'especially the fried chicken from KFC'.

× My family often went there because the food is very tasty and the price were affordable for the whole family.

✓ My family often went there because the food was very tasty and the prices were affordable for the whole family.

Maintain past tense consistency: use 'was' for 'the food' and 'were' for 'prices'. 'Price' should be plural 'prices' or rephrase as 'the price was affordable'.

× Recently I have test uh ikan panting tempoyak uh by my mom by my mom cook.

✓ Recently I tried ikan patin with tempoyak that my mom cooked.

Use 'tried' (past simple) or present perfect 'have tried' for recent experience; original 'have test' is incorrect. 'Ikan panting' appears to be 'ikan patin' and word order should be 'ikan patin with tempoyak'. Use 'that my mom cooked' to form a relative clause; avoid repetition 'by my mom' twice.

× This dish is very muffled doing for me and I would after that I really like the dish and always.

✓ This dish is very comforting to me, and after that I really liked it and I always do.

'Muffled doing' is incorrect — likely intended 'comforting' or 'memorable'. Use 'comforting to me' or 'meaningful to me'. Maintain past tense 'liked' for the change in preference. The ending 'and always' is vague; clarified as 'and I always do' (if meaning continue to like it) or 'and I always eat it' depending on context.