Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence saying whether there are tall buildings, then give one or two specific details (name, significance) using correct tense and articles. Avoid unfinished sentences and irrelevant phrases.

Example: Yes, there are tall buildings near my home. For example, the Bayou Sky Building used to be the tallest building in Bangkok and is owned by Via Bayou, who is quite well-known.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct verb forms and time expressions. If describing a past event, use past tense and give one clear detail about why you took the photos. Avoid confusing or irrelevant details (e.g., 'star in a car').

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. For instance, about two years ago my boyfriend and I had dinner at Bayou Sky and I took many night photos because the building looked beautiful against the stars.

Suggestion: Be specific about which building you want to visit and explain why. Use correct future expressions and a linking word to add a reason or detail.

Example: Yes. Next month I am going to Busan, South Korea, and I would like to visit the Busan Cinema Center because it is famous for its dramatic roof and hosts international film festivals.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first (yes or no), then provide one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use correct vocabulary for houses and earthquakes and avoid unclear phrases like 'house which health two or three'.

Example: No, I would not like to live in a tall building. I prefer a low-rise house with two or three floors because after the earthquake in Thailand last year I worry about safety in very tall buildings.

× Is in my hometown I have building called Bayou Sky building which is used to be the highest building in Bangkok and the owner name Via Bayou.

✓ In my hometown, I have a building called the Bayou Sky Building, which used to be the tallest building in Bangkok, and the owner's name is Via Bayou.

Multiple structural issues: missing subject before 'In my hometown', missing articles ('a', 'the'), incorrect tense 'used to be' needed 'used to be' (corrected), and missing verb 'is' for the owner's name. Suggestion: start with the location phrase followed by a comma, include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns, use 'used to be' for past states, and include the verb 'is' when giving a name.

× He is famous and.

✓ He is famous.

Sentence fragment: 'and' at the end creates an incomplete sentence. Remove the conjunction or complete the clause with additional information (for example, 'He is famous and successful'). Suggestion: avoid dangling conjunctions and ensure sentences are complete with subject and predicate.

× I take many photo of this building when I'm go this building for dinner with my boyfriend about two years ago and at that time it's just the night time so I can see a lot of star in a car.

✓ I took many photos of this building when I went there for dinner with my boyfriend about two years ago, and at that time it was nighttime so I could see a lot of stars from the car.

Mixed tense and form errors: the event happened in the past, so 'take' should be 'took' and 'photo' should be plural 'photos'. 'I'm go' is incorrect; use past 'I went' or 'I went there'. 'It's just the night time' should be past 'it was nighttime'. 'Can see' should be 'could see' to match past. 'a lot of star' needs plural 'stars' and 'in a car' should be 'from the car' for correct preposition. Suggestion: keep past-time consistency and use correct plural forms and prepositions.

× Yes, I have. In next month I am going to Busan, South Korea and I would like to visit some building which is famous in Busan.

✓ Yes, I have. Next month I am going to Busan, South Korea, and I would like to visit some buildings that are famous in Busan.

Article and number issues: 'In next month' is unidiomatic; use 'Next month'. 'some building' should be plural 'some buildings'. 'which is famous in Busan' should be 'that are famous in Busan' to refer to plural buildings. Suggestion: use natural time expressions ('next month') and match number agreement between quantifiers and nouns.

× I prefer to live in a house which health two or three, four not exceed than that.

✓ I prefer to live in a house that has two or three bedrooms, not more than four.

Many issues: 'which health' is meaningless; likely intended 'that has'. Use 'bedrooms' to clarify what 'two or three' refers to. 'not exceed than that' is ungrammatical; use 'not more than four' or 'not exceeding four'. Suggestion: use 'that has' for possession and correct comparative constructions like 'not more than'.

× I don't like to live in tall building because in Thailand we have earthquake last year ago and it will be problem if I live in our building.

✓ I don't like to live in a tall building because in Thailand we had an earthquake last year, and it would be a problem if I lived in a tall building.

Tense and article errors: 'in tall building' needs 'in a tall building'. 'we have earthquake last year ago' mixes present and past; use past 'we had an earthquake last year'. 'it will be problem' needs article 'a problem' and conditional 'would be' to match hypothetical. 'if I live in our building' should be 'if I lived in a tall building' to be consistent. Suggestion: use correct articles, past tense for past events, and conditional mood for hypothetical situations.