Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid filler phrases like 'like' and 'umm'. Also correct sentence structures (e.g., 'My house is in a residential area' and 'the nearest houses are only two storeys').

Example: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. My house is in a residential area where most houses are only two storeys high, so the skyline is quite low.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Use past/present consistently and avoid hesitation words. Replace 'like' and 'umm' with cohesive devices such as 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. For example, when I visit Kings Park or New City I photograph the skyline because I like the contrast between old and modern architecture.

Suggestion: Give one clear reason and support it with a specific detail. Use accurate descriptions and correct grammar (e.g., 'connected to other structures' or 'surrounded by plazas'). Avoid vague phrases and filler at the end like 'but let's see'.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and has a striking glass facade. I am interested in the observation deck to see panoramic views of the city.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give one clear benefit with a specific example. Improve grammar (e.g., 'Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, preferably on a higher floor'). Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, preferably on a high floor, because it offers great views. For example, at night I could enjoy the city lights and open sky from my balcony.

× No actually there are no tall buildings near my house because my house is just in like house area so I can't see any tall buildings.

✓ No, actually there are no tall buildings near my house because my house is in a residential area, so I can't see any tall buildings.

Run-on and informal phrasing: missing commas and use of 'like house area' is incorrect. Use 'residential area' and separate clauses with a comma before 'so' to improve clarity and formality. Grammar problem type ID:16

× My next house it's only 2 levels and that's it.

✓ My current house has only two levels, and that's it.

Fragment and redundancy: 'My next house it's' is ungrammatical. Use subject + verb structure: 'My current house has only two levels.' Spell out numbers in formal speech and add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I do take photos of buildings.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings.

Unnecessary use of auxiliary 'do' in present simple affirmative sentences; simple present is correct for habitual actions. Removing 'do' makes the sentence natural. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Like for example, if I go to Kings Park, I can see a lot of tall buildings and I think it looks really cool.

✓ For example, if I go to Kings Park, I can see a lot of tall buildings, and I think they look really cool.

Redundant 'Like for example' and pronoun agreement: 'it looks' should be 'they look' to agree with plural 'buildings'. Also remove informal 'Like'. Add comma before 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yeah. So sometimes I take photos of buildings or whenever I go to New City, I took some umm, photos of the buildings.

✓ Sometimes I take photos of buildings; when I go to the city, I take photos of the buildings.

Inconsistent tense: 'took' (past) with 'sometimes' (habitual). Use present simple 'take' for habitual actions. Also remove filler 'umm' and use consistent noun 'the city' or 'New City'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I would like to visit Burj Khalifa in Dubai because that building has like connected by two buildings and it's very tall, it's very shiny and so many tourists to visit there every year.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because the building is connected to two other buildings, it is very tall and shiny, and many tourists visit it every year.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'Burj Khalifa', incorrect passive/structure 'has like connected by', wrong infinitive 'to visit there'. Use 'connected to two other buildings', correct pronoun and verb forms, and simplify punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:11

× So I'm interested in visiting that place, but let's see.

✓ So I'm interested in visiting that place, but we'll see.

'Let's see' is informal and suggests speaker's action with listener; 'we'll see' better expresses uncertainty about future plans. This is a stylistic/article-related adjustment to fit context. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Within yes, I would like to live in tall building if I can live in higher stories.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building if I could live on a higher floor.

Awkward opener 'Within yes' is incorrect. Use 'a tall building' (article required) and 'on a higher floor' for idiomatic English. Conditional 'if I could' or 'if I can' depends on certainty; 'could' is more natural here. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think that's the benefit for living in tall buildings.

✓ I think that's the benefit of living in tall buildings.

Preposition choice: use 'benefit of' rather than 'benefit for'. Also plural 'buildings' is fine if speaking generally. This is a preposition/article collocation issue. Grammar problem type ID:17

× So you can see all the sky view and night time you can see the sight.

✓ You can see the whole sky view, and at night you can enjoy the view.

Awkward phrasing: 'all the sky view' and 'see the sight' are unnatural. Use 'the whole sky view' or 'the skyline' and 'at night you can enjoy the view' for clarity and idiomatic expression. Also add comma and preposition 'at' for time. Grammar problem type ID:11