Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer the question first. Use correct grammar (e.g., articles, plurals, sentence structure), avoid filler words like "uh", and organize supporting details with linking words. Give one or two clear supporting points about nearby buildings and their style.

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings close to my home. However, the city centre does have several tall buildings, many of which reflect traditional architectural styles, and people often admire their decorative façades.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence. Explain reason(s) briefly and use linking words (for example, because, so, and). Avoid repeating words and check grammar (e.g., verb forms, articles, countable nouns).

Example: Yes, I do. I often photograph buildings because I like to document interesting designs, and I sometimes print the photos to use as decorations in my room.

Suggestion: Answer directly by naming the building and explain why you want to visit it with specific details. Use linking phrases (for example, because, especially, for example) and avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the local architecture museum because it displays historical architectural drawings and exhibits showing influences from China, Arabia and Persia, which would help me understand regional styles better.

Suggestion: Give a clear reason and expand briefly with a supporting detail and linking words. Replace vague words like "danger" with specific concerns (for example, earthquakes, fire safety, or crowding). Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because it can be risky during earthquakes, and evacuation can be difficult; I prefer a low-rise house that feels safer and more convenient.

× No enclose my home, there is no tall building, but in my city there is several tall buildings.

✓ No, near my home there are no tall buildings, but in my city there are several tall buildings.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and incorrect subject-verb agreement. Use a clear subject and verb order: 'near my home there are no tall buildings' and correct 'there is several tall buildings' to 'there are several tall buildings' because 'buildings' is plural. Also add a comma after 'No' for natural speech pause. Suggestion: Practice forming 'there is/there are' structures with singular and plural nouns.

× So it's really architectural and it's, uh, architectural is, uh, traditional.

✓ So the architecture is really traditional.

The phrase 'really architectural' is awkward because 'architectural' describes something related to architecture and needs a noun to modify. Repeating 'it's, uh, architectural is' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'the architecture is really traditional' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'architecture' as the noun and pair it with an adjective like 'traditional'.

× So many people really enjoy this, uh, this beautiful of architecture.

✓ So many people really enjoy this beautiful architecture.

The structure 'this beautiful of architecture' is incorrect; 'of' is unnecessary. Use the noun phrase 'beautiful architecture' or 'this beautiful architecture'. Also remove the repeated filler 'this'. Suggestion: Learn correct noun phrase patterns: determiner + adjective + noun.

× Take support of the building because it's for my documentations.

✓ I take photographs of buildings because they are for my documentation.

'Take support of the building' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'I take photographs of buildings' to express the action. Also 'documentations' is uncountable or usually singular 'documentation', and plural 'they are' agrees with 'photographs'. Suggestion: Use specific verbs ('take photographs') and correct noun forms ('documentation').

× And as I also print this photo, the beautiful picture of this building as a something sort of sort of decoration in my my room.

✓ I also print the photos and use the beautiful pictures of the buildings as decorations in my room.

The original sentence is repetitive ('as a something sort of sort of', duplicate 'my') and word order is confusing. Use parallel verbs 'print' and 'use' and plural forms 'photos' and 'pictures' with 'decorations' to match plurality. Remove filler words. Suggestion: Avoid filler repetition and use clear parallel structure: 'I print the photos and use them as decorations.'

× Yes, this is a museum museum uh, collects some the past architectural pictures, uh, collect some of the past architecture, uh, influence from Chinese, from Arabia, from Persia, something like so that we could see uh.

✓ Yes, there is a museum that collects photographs of past architecture influenced by China, Arabia, and Persia so we can see them.

The original has repetition ('museum museum'), missing relative clause structure, incorrect articles ('some the past'), and awkward phrasing 'influence from Chinese'. Use 'there is a museum that collects photographs of past architecture influenced by...' and name sources correctly (China, Arabia, Persia). Also 'so that we could see them' becomes 'so we can see them' for present relevance. Suggestion: Use 'that' to introduce relative clauses and correct noun forms ('photographs', 'influenced by').

× No, I don't, because it's a danger, uh, in my city when is so oh so dangerous.

✓ No, I don't, because it's dangerous in my city.

The phrase 'it's a danger' is odd when describing living in a tall building; 'dangerous' is the adjective needed. 'when is so oh so dangerous' is ungrammatical and redundant. Simplify to 'because it's dangerous in my city.' Suggestion: Use adjective 'dangerous' to describe situations and avoid redundant filler words.