Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details linked with conjunctions. Use plural agreement and correct word forms (e.g., 'tall buildings', 'many houses', 'quiet and open').

Example: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small rural town, so most houses are low-rise and the area is usually quiet and open. For example, the nearest apartment block is only three storeys high and is a 20-minute walk away.

Suggestion: Fix word choice and agreement, be concise, and organize reasons with linking words. Replace unclear phrases ('our teacher', 'photogenous') with accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'photogenic', 'interesting to me'). Ensure correct pronouns and plurals.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find them photogenic and architecturally interesting. For example, when I visited Kuala Lumpur, I photographed the Petronas Towers because their design and height looked impressive in pictures.

Suggestion: Be clear and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'views', 'architecture up close'). Avoid small grammar errors and use linking words to connect reasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and give a specific detail about what you expect to see or do.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it looks spectacular in photos and videos. I want to go to the top to enjoy panoramic views of the city and to examine the iron lattice architecture up close.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'luxury hotel', 'I would rent/buy a condo'), avoid repetition and typing errors, and use a conditional sentence properly. Provide a clear main sentence and one supporting reason or example.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, such as a luxury hotel or a serviced condo in Kuala Lumpur, because the views are excellent and they offer good facilities and security. If I had a stable job there and could afford it, I would rent a condo in one of the towers.

× No, there are not any tall building near my house.

✓ No, there are not any tall buildings near my house.

The noun 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because it follows the plural form required after 'any' with 'are not'. Use 'tall buildings' to agree in number with the plural verb construction.

× I live in a small rural town so much houses are low rise and the area frequently quiet and opened.

✓ I live in a small rural town, so many houses are low-rise and the area is frequently quiet and open.

Multiple issues: 'much' is incorrect with countable 'houses' — use 'many' (singular/plural issue but listed under present tense because of state verbs). 'Low rise' should be hyphenated as the compound adjective 'low-rise'. The adjectives describing state require the verb 'is' for 'the area' and 'open' (not 'opened') as an adjective. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× Yes, I usually take photos of buildings because I find it our teacher very photogenous and interesting.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of buildings because I find them very photogenic and interesting.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect; use 'them' to refer back to 'photos' or 'buildings' (plural). 'Photogenous' is not the correct adjective here; use 'photogenic'. This corrects pronoun reference and adjective choice.

× For example, when I visited Kuala Lumpur, I photographed the Petronas tower because their design and height looked impressive in photo.

✓ For example, when I visited Kuala Lumpur, I photographed the Petronas Towers because their design and height looked impressive in photos.

Capitalization and noun form: the landmark is commonly called 'Petronas Towers' (plural). 'Their' is correct to refer to the twin towers. Use plural 'photos' (countable) and 'in photos' rather than 'in photo'.

× I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it looks very impressive in the videos and photos I have seen.

✓ I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it looks very impressive in the videos and photos I have seen.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is correct. Included here to indicate no change required.

× I want to go to the top to enjoy the view of the movie and to see the towers are architecture up close.

✓ I want to go to the top to enjoy the view and to see the tower's architecture up close.

The phrase 'view of the movie' is incorrect; likely intended simply 'the view'. 'Towers are architecture' is ungrammatical — use 'tower's architecture' (possessive) or 'the architecture of the tower'. Also singular 'tower' fits the Eiffel Tower. 'Up close' is correct as adverbial phrase.

× I would like to live in a luxury hot rice like a five star hotel in Kuala Lumpur because the views are great and the buildings usually have excellent facilities and security.

✓ I would like to live in a luxury hotel, like a five-star hotel in Kuala Lumpur, because the views are great and such buildings usually have excellent facilities and security.

'Hot rice' is a typographical error; should be 'hotel'. Use hyphens in 'five-star'. 'The buildings' is vague; 'such buildings' or 'these buildings' clarifies meaning. Commas improve sentence flow.

× If I I had a job there and could afford it, I would rate a condo in one of the towers.

✓ If I had a job there and could afford it, I would rent a condo in one of the towers.

Typo 'I I' should be single 'I'. 'Rate a condo' is incorrect verb choice — likely 'rent a condo'. The conditional structure 'If I had... I would rent' is appropriate for this unreal present/future situation.