Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, when I visit another city I enjoy watching the changing architecture and people on the streets, which gives me a sense of the place.

Suggestion: Combine short fragments into fluent sentences and explain briefly why you take photos or videos. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unnecessary technical details unless relevant.

Example: Yes, I often take photos and videos of the scenery from the car. I like recording videos in high quality because they capture details better, and later I can review the trip or share highlights with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference statement followed by two specific reasons linked coherently. Use correct comparative forms and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'prefer the sea to the mountains'). Avoid listing too many activities without linking them to your preference.

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy the lively summer atmosphere. For instance, I like watching people swim and play volleyball on the beach, and I also enjoy sampling fresh seafood at local beachside cafés.

× I always look out the window for seeing scenery when traveling because it's make me feel relaxed especially when I'm travel in other county so I like it.

✓ I always look out the window to see the scenery when traveling because it makes me feel relaxed, especially when I'm traveling in another country, so I like it.

Errors: incorrect verb form and tense consistency. 'for seeing' is wrong; use the infinitive 'to see' for purpose. 'it's make' should be 'it makes' (subject-verb agreement, present tense). 'I'm travel' should be 'I'm traveling' (present continuous). 'other county' should be 'another country' (word choice and article). Suggestions: use infinitive for purpose, ensure subject-verb agreement with third person singular, and use present continuous for actions in progress; choose correct noun and article ('another country').

× Absolutely yes. I always take a photo and not only photo but also take a video and for video it should be 4K.

✓ Absolutely. I always take photos; not only photos but also videos, and for videos they should be in 4K.

Errors: pluralization and agreement. Use plural 'photos' and 'videos' when speaking generally. 'and for video it should be 4K' is awkward and has pronoun agreement issues; better: 'for videos they should be in 4K.' Suggestions: use plural nouns for habitual actions, make pronouns agree with plural antecedents, and rephrase for clarity.

× I prefer sea than mountain because I like the summer vibe.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I like the summer vibe.

Error: incorrect comparative structure. English uses 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A than B'. Also use definite articles with general places: 'the sea' and plural 'the mountains' for the category. Suggestion: use 'prefer ... to ...' and appropriate articles.

× I like to see people go to the beach, swimming, playing volleyball and find some good food.

✓ I like to see people going to the beach, swimming, playing volleyball, and finding some good food.

Errors: inconsistent verb forms in a series. After 'see people' the gerund or present participle 'going' is natural. Maintain parallel -ing forms: 'going, swimming, playing, and finding.' Alternatively, use base verbs with 'see people' if meaning is different. Suggestion: keep verb forms parallel and use '-ing' after 'see' when describing ongoing activities.