Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked with a linking word. Correct minor grammar and word choice errors (e.g. use "it is" or "it's", "an exciting time" rather than "exciting and intriguing time").

Example: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it’s an interesting way to notice how places differ from my hometown. For example, I enjoy watching the architecture and farmland change as we move between towns.

Suggestion: Speak more clearly and correct grammar and word choice: use concise expressions and link ideas logically. Avoid repetition (e.g. "when I when I'm"). Use one or two specific reasons and an example. Replace "memorize" with "remember" and "sow" with "saw".

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the window because I want to remember what I saw during the trip. For instance, I usually photograph unusual buildings or landscapes so I can look back at them later and share them with my family.

Suggestion: Use correct comparative grammar (say "prefer the sea to the mountains") and be concise. Give one clear reason and a specific example, linked with a word like "because" or "for example." Avoid repeating phrases like "I would prefer the sea" in the same answer.

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because there are usually more cafes and restaurants nearby, which makes family outings easier. For example, we can have a beach picnic and then walk along the promenade, which I find very relaxing and fun.

× Yes, I often watch scenery when traveling by bus and car because it's really exciting and intriguing time to watch the differences between my own country and other areas.

✓ Yes, I often watch the scenery when traveling by bus or car because it's really exciting and intriguing to see the differences between my own country and other places.

Use 'watch the scenery' (include article 'the') and 'bus or car' (use 'or' for alternatives). 'To see' is more natural than 'to watch' here, and 'other areas' should be 'other places'. Also add 'to' before 'see' for the infinitive.' Suggestion: Use 'the scenery' and 'bus or car', and prefer 'see' for observing landscapes.

× Yes I do. It is because I want to memorize everything I saw when I when I'm traveling because people often forget most of things they sow so pictures would be the best way to memorize my great memory.

✓ Yes, I do. It is because I want to remember everything I see when I'm traveling, because people often forget most of the things they saw, so pictures are the best way to preserve my memories.

Use 'remember' (not 'memorize' which is less natural here) and maintain consistent tense: 'see' when referring to the general action during traveling. 'Most of the things' needs the article 'the'. Use past participle 'seen' only when needed; here 'they saw' is fine for past reference. 'Sow' is a spelling error; use 'saw'. 'Pictures are the best way to preserve my memories' corrects awkward phrasing and verb agreement ('are' with plural 'pictures'). Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and choose more natural verbs ('remember', 'preserve memories').

× I prefer the sea than the mountain because there are typically a lot of restaurants and cafe near the sea, so we can go to the beach and picnic with my family.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because there are typically a lot of restaurants and cafes near the sea, so we can go to the beach and have a picnic with my family.

Use 'prefer A to B' (not 'prefer A than B'). Use plural 'mountains' for general preference and plural 'cafes'. Also 'have a picnic' is the correct collocation. Ensure agreement and articles: 'a lot of restaurants and cafes' and 'with my family'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', pluralize countable nouns when general, and use correct collocations ('have a picnic').

× And for me it's really exciting and meaningful time, so I would prefer the sea.

✓ For me, it's a really exciting and meaningful time, so I would prefer the sea.

Add the article 'a' before 'really exciting and meaningful time'. Also add a comma after introductory phrase 'For me'. The modal 'would prefer' is acceptable for polite preference; keep it if intended. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns and punctuate introductory phrases.