Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct some grammar (e.g., 'builders' likely incorrect; use 'scenery' or 'landscape'; 'beautiful surroundings' without article or with 'the'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' for coherence, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy the changing scenery. For example, I like spotting green fields and small towns, which relaxes me and improves my mood. I sometimes take photos to remember the view.

Suggestion: Make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct answer ('Yes, I do.') Then give specific examples and a concise reason. Avoid repetition ('take pictures' repeated) and improve verb forms ('keen on taking', 'help me remember'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I do. I am keen on photography, so I often take pictures of birds and landscapes through the window because they help me remember trips and special moments.

Suggestion: Start with a concise preference (mountains or sea) then give one clear reason and a specific example. Fix grammar ('love to walk in the mountains', 'Shimla is popular in my country') and avoid irrelevant details (long mention of social media). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy walking and fresh air. For example, I love the hills around Shimla in my country, which are popular with tourists and pilgrims, and I enjoy seeing photos and videos of them before visiting.

× Yes, of course, while traveling, I often prefer to see the builders to see the serene environment.

✓ Yes, of course. While traveling, I often prefer to look at the scenery to enjoy the peaceful environment.

The original uses 'see the builders' which is incorrect in context and awkward phrasing. 'Prefer to see' is grammatically possible but 'prefer to look at the scenery' is more natural for present habitual actions. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'look at the scenery' or 'enjoy the scenery' for describing observing outside views. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× It helps me to enhance my mood as well as I always prefer to take pictures of that beautiful surroundings.

✓ It helps improve my mood, and I always prefer to take pictures of those beautiful surroundings.

Awkward use of 'to enhance my mood' and incorrect article/number agreement 'that beautiful surroundings.' Use simple present 'helps improve' for habitual effect and 'those' to agree with plural 'surroundings.' Also use 'and' to join clauses correctly. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Absolutely yes, as I keen to taking pictures, I often try to take pictures of birds and surroundings of the environment in from the window and it helps me to remember my old memories in the future.

✓ Absolutely. Because I am keen on taking pictures, I often try to photograph birds and the surroundings through the window; it helps me remember past memories.

'I keen to taking' is incorrect: the correct pattern is 'keen on taking' and requires 'am' for present tense. 'Photograph' is more concise than 'take pictures of', and 'in from the window' is incorrect preposition use; use 'through the window.' 'Remember my old memories in the future' is redundant and awkward—use 'remember past memories' or simply 'recall memories.' Grammar problem type ID: 8

× So I always try to take pictures from window.

✓ So I always try to take pictures from the window.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'window.' Preposition 'from' can be used but needs the article: 'from the window.' Alternatively say 'through the window' for clarity. This is an article/preposition combination error. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× To be very honest, I often love to do walk on mountains so I love to see mountains of Shimla city which is very popular in my nation and I saw different kind of videos on social media about this which is uploaded by tourists as well as pilgrims.

✓ To be honest, I often enjoy walking in the mountains, so I love to see the mountains around Shimla, which are very popular in my country. I have seen different kinds of videos on social media about them uploaded by tourists and pilgrims.

Multiple issues: 'love to do walk' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy walking' or 'like to walk.' Use 'in the mountains' or 'in the mountains' rather than 'on mountains.' 'Mountains of Shimla city' is awkward; 'mountains around Shimla' is natural. 'Nation' should be 'country.' Tense: 'I saw' should be present perfect 'I have seen' to link past experience to present. 'Different kind' needs plural 'kinds.' Also 'which is uploaded' should agree with plural subject 'videos' -> 'uploaded.' These fixes address present tense, verb forms, prepositions, and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 6