Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to support your answer. Use linking words so the reply is coherent and within 3–4 sentences. Also correct minor grammar (e.g., “scenery” is uncountable) and use natural phrasing.

Example: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery along the route is interesting. For example, I often enjoy watching rivers and farms pass by, which helps me relax. However, if I’m busy on my phone or asleep, I won’t look out.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and combine repeated ideas into one concise statement. Provide one specific example of what you photograph or why it’s memorable. Avoid filler phrases like “you know” and repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window because it helps me capture memories of places I visit. For example, I like photographing unusual cloud formations and old farmhouses because they remind me of the trip later.

Suggestion: Give a single clear preference sentence, then add 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect grammar; use correct nouns (e.g., “scenery,” “mountains”) and coherent comparisons. Keep the reply to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and the quiet atmosphere. For instance, hiking on mountain trails helps me unwind, whereas the sea can be noisy and crowded.

× Yes, I look out at the window because there are very good views of the sceneries if we look.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window because there are very good views if we look.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Also use 'look out of the window' (or 'look out the window') and omit the redundant 'of the sceneries' after 'views'. Suggestion: use 'scenery' or simply 'views'.

× If I look on the sceneries, then I look out at the window.

✓ If I look at the scenery, then I look out the window.

We say 'look at' or 'look out the window', not 'look on the sceneries'. 'Scenery' is uncountable; use singular. Also 'look out at the window' is acceptable but 'look out the window' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'look at the scenery' or 'look out the window'.

× Otherwise I don't look out at the window when I'm traveling by car or bus.

✓ Otherwise I don't look out the window when I'm traveling by car or bus.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'look out at the window' is less natural than 'look out the window'. No -ing form error remains; kept present continuous 'I'm traveling' which fits. Suggestion: use 'look out the window'.

× Yeah, I love to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like to gather some memories.

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because I like to capture memories.

'Gather some memories' is non-idiomatic; 'capture memories' or 'create memories' is natural. 'Love to take' is acceptable but 'love taking' flows better. Suggestion: use idiomatic verbs like 'capture' or 'create'.

× You know, I like to capture pictures.

✓ You know, I like capturing pictures.

Using 'like to capture' is grammatically acceptable, but 'like capturing pictures' is more natural in continuous context. Either form is fine; adjusted for consistency. Suggestion: prefer 'take pictures' or 'capture images'.

× I love it.

✓ I really enjoy it.

'I love it' is grammatical but brief; 'I really enjoy it' fits conversational tone. No strict grammatical error; provided stylistic improvement. Suggestion: choose idiomatic phrases.

× I often prefer mountains because it's like a sceneries.

✓ I often prefer the mountains because they are scenic.

'Sceneries' is incorrect; use uncountable 'scenery' or adjective 'scenic'. Also subject 'mountains' is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it's'. Suggestion: 'the mountains are scenic' or 'I prefer the mountains because they have beautiful scenery'.

× It's huge and but in the sea I like some waves.

✓ They are huge, and at the sea I like the waves.

Mixes singular 'it' with plural 'mountains'. Use 'they' for mountains. 'But' misplaced; 'at the sea' or 'by the sea' is better than 'in the sea' when talking about liking waves. Suggestion: 'The mountains are huge, but by the sea I like the waves.'

× I like bees there I like but in the mountains I love.

✓ I like being by the sea, but I love the mountains.

Original is fragmented and contains 'bees' which is likely a mispronunciation of 'beaches' or 'bees' is wrong. Interpreted as 'beaches' or 'being there'. Rewrote for clarity: contrast between sea and mountains. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning; use conjunctions properly.

× I love mountains, by the way, because mountain has good.

✓ I love the mountains, by the way, because they are beautiful.

'Mountain has good' is ungrammatical: 'mountain' singular doesn't match context and 'has good' is incomplete. Use 'the mountains' and an adjective like 'beautiful' or 'good scenery'. Suggestion: 'I love the mountains because they have beautiful scenery.'