Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid tense and pronoun mistakes, reduce fillers (uh), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I enjoy comparing the landscape to my hometown because the architecture and vegetation are often different. For example, I notice more hills and fields here, which makes the journey more interesting.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and use correct verb forms. Begin with a direct answer, then give clear reasons using linking words like because or so. Avoid vague phrases (ready live, chased) and be specific about how photos vary (light, weather, seasons). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the view from the car window because the light and weather change every day. For example, a cloudy morning can make the same scene look moody, while a sunny afternoon makes colors much brighter.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and avoid repetition. Use correct comparative and singular/plural forms (mountains vs mountain, sea gives). Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, for example). Remove fillers and keep concise (2–3 sentences).

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because the salty air and the sound of waves feel refreshing. For example, walking along the beach makes me feel relaxed and energetic, especially on a sunny day.

× Yes, I always look for the scenery by the window when you're traveling, especially when I on the car.

✓ Yes, I always look at the scenery out of the window when I'm traveling, especially when I'm in the car.

The original mixes second and first person pronouns ('you're' should be 'I'm') and omits the verb 'am' before 'on the car'. Use consistent first-person references for the speaker ('I'm') and the correct preposition 'in' with 'car'. Also 'look for the scenery' is unnatural; use 'look at the scenery'.

× I will take a look of the BU beautiful, breathtaking view outside and see what's different, uh, compared with my hometown.

✓ I will take a look at the beautiful, breathtaking view outside and see what is different compared with my hometown.

'Take a look of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take a look at'. 'BU' appears to be an error or extraneous and was removed. Use 'what is' or the contraction 'what's' for clarity. Ensure proper adjective order: 'beautiful, breathtaking view'.

× Yes, I'm ready live to take the photo of the view I've I've chased in each day outside the window.

✓ Yes, I'm ready to take photos of the views I see each day outside the window.

The sentence contains repeated words ('I've I've'), incorrect verb choice ('chased'), and unnecessary 'live'. Use 'ready to take photos' (infinitive after 'ready') and 'see' to describe observing views. Make 'photos' plural for naturalness and 'views I see each day' to convey the intended meaning.

× It will give us a different viewpoint each day because of the weather and the circumstance.

✓ It gives us a different viewpoint each day because of the weather and the circumstances.

For habitual actions use simple present 'gives' rather than 'will give'. 'Circumstance' should be plural 'circumstances' in this context. Also 'because of' is correct; maintain subject-verb agreement with 'it gives'.

× I love to see more than the mountain because, uh, the sea give us a more white wipey wave, more refreshing.

✓ I prefer to see the sea more than the mountains because the sea gives us whiter, wavier, more refreshing waves.

'Prefer... more than' is a clearer comparative structure. 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. Subject-verb agreement: 'sea gives' (third person singular). 'More white wipey wave' contains incorrect adjectives; use comparative/adjective forms 'whiter, wavier' and move them before 'waves'.

× The air, the salty air, the breathtaking view, the atmosphere and the water of the sea make us feel alive.

✓ The salty air, the breathtaking view, the atmosphere, and the sea's water make me feel alive.

List items should be parallel and concise. Repeating 'the air' then 'the salty air' is redundant; keep 'the salty air'. 'Make us feel alive' is acceptable but 'make me feel alive' matches singular speaker context. 'The water of the sea' is more naturally 'the sea's water' or simply 'the sea'.