Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail connected with linking words. Correct verb tenses and article use (e.g., “the window,” “the scenery,” “in my car,” “I often take pictures”).

Example: Yes, I do — I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by car because the countryside offers a nicer view. For example, I often stop or slow down to take photos of interesting buildings or fields, and then I share them with my friends.

Suggestion: Organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (use present simple: “I often share”) and avoid fragmented phrases. Provide specific examples of what you photograph and where you post them.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of scenery through the car window. For instance, I like capturing sunsets and mountain views, and I usually post the best shots on Instagram because my friends enjoy seeing them.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give specific reasons using linking words. Use correct tense and more varied vocabulary (e.g., “cooler climate,” “peaceful atmosphere,” “fresh air”). Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I prefer the mountains because their cooler climate and peaceful atmosphere help me relax. For example, hiking among pine trees and breathing fresh air calms me down much more than noisy beaches.

× Yes, I love looking at the window and at the scenery when traveling by my car because it has better view outside.

✓ Yes, I love looking out of the window and at the scenery when traveling by car because it has a better view outside.

Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' rather than 'looking at the window' which implies observing the window itself. Omit 'my' before 'car' when speaking generally; say 'by car' or 'when traveling by car'. Add the article 'a' before 'better view' to form 'a better view'. Suggestion: say 'looking out of the window' or 'looking out the window', use 'by car', and include 'a' before 'better view'.

× I often clicked some pictures and I shared them with my friends.

✓ I often take pictures and share them with my friends.

The student uses past simple 'clicked' and 'shared' but 'often' indicates habitual action, so the present simple is appropriate: 'take' and 'share'. Also 'clicked' is informal; 'take pictures' is more natural. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions: 'I often take pictures and share them with my friends.'

× Yes, I am fond of taking photos of the outside scenery through the window I often shared with my friends or in a social media.

✓ Yes, I am fond of taking photos of the scenery outside through the window; I often share them with my friends or on social media.

Place 'outside' before or after 'scenery' for natural word order: 'scenery outside' or 'the scenery outside'. Add punctuation or a conjunction between clauses. Use present simple 'share' for habitual action. Use 'on social media' not 'in a social media'. Also 'share them' clarifies the object. Suggestion: use 'on social media', present simple for habits, and add proper clause separation.

× I love taking pictures of landscapes in addition. Skylight, sunset.

✓ I also love taking pictures of landscapes, such as skylines and sunsets.

The fragment 'Skylight, sunset.' is incomplete and unclear. Use 'such as skylines and sunsets' to give examples. 'In addition' can be replaced with 'also' for smoother flow. 'Skylight' likely incorrect for 'skyline' or 'skylight' (a window); choose 'skyline' or 'sunset' depending on meaning. Suggestion: provide full sentence with examples: 'I also love taking pictures of landscapes, such as skylines and sunsets.'

× I prefer mountains because it was cold in mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains because it is cold in the mountains.

The sentence uses past tense 'was' while expressing a general, habitual reason; present simple 'is' is required. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'mountains' when speaking about mountains in general. Repeat 'the' before the second 'mountains' or rephrase as 'in the mountains.' Suggestion: use present simple for general facts and include articles: 'I prefer the mountains because it is cold in the mountains.'

× It made me feel relaxed and calm.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and calm.

Again, 'made' is past tense but the speaker is describing a general effect that still applies; use present simple 'makes'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual or general feelings: 'It makes me feel relaxed and calm.'

× I often feel more relaxed there.

✓ I often feel more relaxed there.

This sentence is correct. It uses present simple appropriately to describe a habitual feeling. No change needed.