Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and correct minor grammar. Mention one or two reasons with a linking word. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, when I chat with friends I send messages on apps like Instagram or WhatsApp, which saves time and is easy to edit.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence (which device) and one supporting detail with a linking word. Fix grammar (e.g., 'moreover' placement) and avoid repeating app names.

Example: I usually type on my mobile phone because it’s what I always carry. Moreover, I often use messaging apps to chat and share memes with friends.

Suggestion: Give a concise, well-structured answer: state the time clearly, then add one specific detail about the learning experience using a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases.

Example: I learned to type in the third grade. During computer lab lessons my teacher showed us how to use the desktop keyboard, and we practised simple exercises to improve accuracy.

Suggestion: Be specific and natural: state one or two practical methods for improvement, use linking words, and give a complete example. Correct grammar and avoid unfinished sentences.

Example: To improve my typing I practise with online typing lessons and use accuracy drills every day. For instance, I once noticed many typos in a message, so I started 15-minute daily exercises to increase speed and reduce mistakes.

× I personally prefer typing as it is very convenient method.

✓ I personally prefer typing as it is a very convenient method.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'very convenient method'. Use 'a' with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'very convenient method'.

× Whenever I am talking to my friend, I just type text and send her on Instagram, WhatsApp and as well as Snapchat.

✓ Whenever I am talking to my friend, I just type a text and send it to her on Instagram, WhatsApp and Snapchat.

Two issues: 'text' as a countable noun needs an article 'a' and the object pronoun for 'text' is 'it' not omitted; the correct preposition is 'send ... to her'. Also 'as well as' is redundant with list. Suggestion: use 'a text' and 'send it to her' and list apps without 'as well as'.

× Yes, if I want to communicate with my friends, I just type on my mobile phone on various apps such as Instagram, WhatsApp and Snapchat.

✓ Yes, if I want to communicate with my friends, I just type on my mobile phone using various apps such as Instagram, WhatsApp and Snapchat.

Preposition 'on' before 'various apps' is awkward; use 'using' to indicate the means. The rest is acceptable. Suggestion: replace second 'on' with 'using'.

× More moreover, we can share memes as well as on these apps.

✓ Moreover, we can share memes on these apps as well.

'More moreover' is redundant and incorrect; 'as well as on these apps' has wrong word order. Use 'Moreover' or 'Furthermore', and place 'on these apps' after 'share memes'. Suggestion: use 'Moreover, we can share memes on these apps as well.'

× When I was in 3rd standard, my teacher taught me how we can type on keyboard whenever there was a computer lab lecture.

✓ When I was in third grade, my teacher taught me how we could type on a keyboard whenever there was a computer lab class.

Use 'third' spelled out in formal writing and 'grade' instead of 'standard' if following US usage; 'we can' in past context should be 'we could'; 'on keyboard' needs article 'a'; 'computer lab lecture' is better as 'computer lab class'. Suggestion: use past form 'could' and include articles, and choose appropriate nouns.'

× We went to lab and she taught us how we can type on desktop with keyboard.

✓ We went to the lab and she taught us how we could type on a desktop using a keyboard.

Missing article 'the' before 'lab', 'we can' should be past 'we could' to match past tense, 'on desktop' needs 'a desktop', and 'with keyboard' is better as 'using a keyboard'. Suggestion: include definite/indefinite articles and match past tense.'

× If I want to improve my typing, I will hire a tutor through which I can learn how we can type accurately as sometime when we are typing we just miss or mistype the words in it.

✓ If I want to improve my typing, I will hire a tutor through whom I can learn how to type accurately, because sometimes when we type we miss or mistype words.

Use 'through whom' for a person (tutor), and 'how we can type' is unnatural — use 'how to type'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Remove 'in it' which is unnecessary. Also simplify redundancy 'when we are typing we just miss' to 'when we type we miss'. Suggestion: use 'through whom', 'how to type', and correct adverb 'sometimes'.

× For instance once I was writing a text to my friend, I just put some mistakes which are.

✓ For instance, once I was writing a text to my friend and I made some mistakes.

Sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured ('which are' is dangling). Use simple past 'made' for mistakes and connect clauses properly. Suggestion: remove 'which are' and use 'and I made some mistakes.'