Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Our people have violent because I really love my handwriting. I think I'm pretty good at it and it is quite satisfying because umm yeah, typing uh, also satisfied by people rather.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
And not everyday because I don't have a laptop and. I not often typing because I'm not good at it. Like I said I prefer handwriting so mostly I would have writing.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Uh, I don't particularly learn how to type because umm, you can type on your phone and like when I was young, I already know how to type. Like it's easy, I think.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Jews are always typing, but to be honest, I didn't uh, like particularly learn how to improve my typing. And it's like because I always, uh, typing when I talking, like texting to my friends.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答要直接、有条理并减少语法和词汇错误。先用一句话明确表态(偏好手写或打字),然后给出1-2个具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意发音含糊和重复填充词(umm, uh)要尽量避免。可以练习常用表达如“I prefer handwriting because...” 并把句子控制在3-4句内。
Example: I prefer handwriting because I find it more personal and satisfying. My handwriting is neat, so I enjoy writing letters and notes by hand. However, I also type when I need speed or to share documents quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答要先直接回应“每天打字吗”,然后给出简短理由和频率说明。注意语法(时态和主谓一致)和句子完整性,避免碎片化表达。可用词组说明频率(every day, usually, rarely)和原因(don’t have a laptop, prefer handwriting)。
Example: No, I don't type every day. I don't own a laptop and I usually write by hand because I'm more comfortable with it. I only type occasionally on my phone when I need to send messages.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答应先给出时间点或时期(e.g. when I was a child/at school),然后说明如何学会并给出简短原因。注意语法(过去时)和去掉多余填充词。可用“since I was young”或“when I was a child”来表述学会时间。
Example: I learned to type when I was a child, mostly by using my parents' phone and a computer at school. It felt easy because I practiced texting and playing games, so I picked it up naturally.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答要具体说明改进方法或缺乏练习的原因,给出具体措施(如online typing courses, practice pages, touch-typing exercises),并用连接词组织句子。避免不相关或含糊的内容(例如错误单词“Jews”)。用清晰的句子描述当前做法或计划。
Example: To improve my typing, I plan to use online typing lessons and practice 15 minutes a day on typing websites. Right now I mostly practice by texting my friends, but structured practice would help me increase speed and accuracy.
× Our people have violent because I really love my handwriting.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I really love my handwriting.
原句句子结构不通顺并且用词不当。“Our people have violent”没有明确意义,可能是想说“我喜欢手写”。应直接用“I prefer handwriting”来表达偏好,使句子完整通顺。建议:先表明偏好(prefer),然后给出原因(because + 从句)。
× I think I'm pretty good at it and it is quite satisfying because umm yeah, typing uh, also satisfied by people rather.
✓ I think I'm pretty good at it and it is quite satisfying. Typing, however, is preferred by some people.
原句中代词和被动结构混用导致表达混乱,“it is quite satisfying because... typing also satisfied by people rather”语法错误。将句子拆分并用主动语态或清晰的比较连接词(however)更合适。建议用“Typing is preferred by some people”或“Some people prefer typing”。
× And not everyday because I don't have a laptop and.
✓ Not every day, because I don't have a laptop.
原句时态与频率表达上可以保留现在时,但句子以连词开头且中断,应改为完整句子“Not every day”并移除多余连词。保持现在时表达习惯性动作。
× I not often typing because I'm not good at it.
✓ I don't often type because I'm not good at it.
原句中使用否定和现在分词搭配不正确。正确构成否定现在时应使用助动词(do) + not + 动词原形:"I don't often type"。
× Like I said I prefer handwriting so mostly I would have writing.
✓ Like I said, I prefer handwriting, so mostly I would write by hand.
原句“have writing”不符合英语习惯,应使用动词“write”并加介词“by hand”来表明方式。保持时态和语义一致。
× Uh, I don't particularly learn how to type because umm, you can type on your phone and like when I was young, I already know how to type.
✓ I didn't particularly learn how to type because you can type on your phone, and when I was young, I already knew how to type.
句中时态不一致:先说过去的学习(didn't learn),后面应使用过去时“knew”而不是现在时“know”。统一改为过去时以保持时序一致。
× Like it's easy, I think.
✓ I think it's easy.
语序应为主语 + 谓语,使句子自然流畅。此处保持现在时描述个人看法。
× Jews are always typing, but to be honest, I didn't uh, like particularly learn how to improve my typing.
✓ I am always typing, but to be honest, I didn't particularly learn how to improve my typing.
原句“Jews”显然是错误词或口误,应为“I”或“I am”。修正为“I am always typing”。此外保持过去时“didn't learn”表示未曾专门学习。
× And it's like because I always, uh, typing when I talking, like texting to my friends.
✓ It's because I'm always typing when I'm talking, like texting my friends.
原句中进行时态使用错误。应使用现在进行时:"I'm always typing"和"I'm talking"。此外“texting to my friends”中不需要介词“to”,应为"texting my friends"。