Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g., "both side" -> "both," "drive by technology" -> "driven by technology").

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting. Because we live in a digital age, typing is faster and more convenient for most tasks, so I usually type for notes and assignments.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, then add a brief, coherent reason. Fix grammar and remove informal fillers. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Example: I type on a laptop every day. My school requires students to use laptops for assignments and classes, so I practice typing constantly to keep up with coursework.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a time reference, then give a specific reason or short example. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "schools in Thailand required" and avoid repeating "technology").

Example: I learned to type in primary school. In Thailand many schools teach basic computer skills early, so I started practicing typing during computer classes when I was about eight years old.

Suggestion: Provide a clear method with a specific example and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases and filler words; use correct grammar ("practice typing every day," "my school encourages").

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I do online typing exercises for 15 minutes each morning and complete typing assignments at school, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer both side, but if I had to choose, I will choose typing in this era.

✓ I prefer both sides, but if I had to choose, I would choose typing in this era.

'both side' is incorrect; 'both' requires a plural noun 'sides'. Also the conditional 'if I had to choose' is a hypothetical past form that requires the modal 'would' (not 'will') to match the second conditional structure. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'both' and match conditional verb forms (if + past => would + base verb).

× So technique, everything, drive by technology.

✓ So techniques and everything are driven by technology.

The original lacks proper subject-verb agreement and the passive participle 'driven' is needed to express 'are driven by technology'. 'Technique' should be plural here ('techniques') or rephrased as 'technology affects everything'. Suggestion: Use correct plural nouns and passive voice structure 'are driven' or active alternative 'technology drives everything'.

× So typing is something that's very convenient and faster than use handwriting.

✓ So typing is something that's very convenient and faster than using handwriting.

After 'than' a verb should be in the -ing form when comparing actions: 'using handwriting'. The phrase 'use handwriting' is wrong here. Also no definite article is needed. Suggestion: Use gerund after comparative structures when comparing activities: 'faster than using handwriting'.

× I type on my laptop every single day as a student, my school for every student to type because it's the basic things that people have to use in your future works.

✓ I type on my laptop every single day as a student. My school requires every student to type because it is a basic skill people will need in their future work.

Multiple errors: 'my school for every student to type' is ungrammatical; correct is 'My school requires every student to type' (third person singular 'requires'). 'it's the basic things' should be 'it is a basic skill' (singular). 'your future works' is incorrect pronoun and pluralization; use 'their future work'. Suggestion: Use proper subject-verb agreement, singular 'skill', and correct possessive pronoun 'their'.

× Yeah, it's so they force everyone to type in.

✓ Yes, they force everyone to type.

The original includes extraneous elements ('so' and trailing 'in') and is awkward. Simplify to a clear active sentence: 'they force everyone to type'. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and remove unnecessary particles.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? I think when I was in primary school, because most of school in Thailand require about computer and typing skills and I think typing is the fundamental things that everyone should learn because technology, technology is through everything.

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? I think when I was in primary school, because most schools in Thailand require computer and typing skills, and I think typing is a fundamental skill that everyone should learn because technology is involved in everything.

Errors fixed: 'most of school' -> 'most schools' (plural). 'require about computer' -> 'require computer' or 'require training in computer' (removed 'about'). 'fundamental things' -> 'a fundamental skill' (singular). Repetitive 'technology, technology is through everything' changed to 'technology is involved in everything'. Suggestion: Use correct plural nouns, remove unnecessary prepositions, and use concise phrasing for clarity.

× I think the fundamental ways to practice to type is you just type every day and it will improve your skills.

✓ I think the fundamental way to practice typing is to just type every day, and it will improve your skills.

Use gerund 'typing' after 'practice' and correct subject-verb agreement: 'the fundamental way ... is to type' or 'to practice typing is to just type'. 'ways' changed to 'way' to match singular construction. Suggestion: Use 'practice' + gerund and ensure the subject and verb agree.

× Like I think my school encourage everyone to like type on the computer and or keyboards every day.

✓ For example, my school encourages everyone to type on computers and keyboards every day.

'encourage' should be 'encourages' for third person singular. Remove filler 'like'. 'type on the computer and or keyboards' is awkward; use plural 'computers and keyboards' or just 'computers'. Suggestion: Use correct verb form for third person, avoid filler words, and keep noun number consistent.

× So that's why people typing fast.

✓ So that's why people type fast.

'people typing fast' is a noun + present participle phrase; the correct finite verb is 'type' to make a complete clause. Also could be 'are typing fast' if emphasizing ongoing action. Suggestion: Use the base verb with plural subject 'people' for simple present statements.