Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer short and clear with one topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Remove repetitions and correct basic grammar (e.g., plural/singular, verb forms). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' once to connect reason and result. For example, say you capture atmosphere and record memories and give a specific instance or type of view you photograph.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to capture the atmosphere and preserve memories. For example, when I visit the coast I photograph the sunrise to remember how peaceful it felt.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer (urban or rural), then give one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and a short example. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Also pronounce or spell place names clearly and use correct adjectives ('peaceful', 'calm').

Example: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and make me feel relaxed. For instance, I like the views from Bulla hill where the quiet landscape and wide fields help me unwind.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer ('I prefer views in other countries'), then explain with one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid pronunciation or word-choice errors (e.g., 'beer' → 'views in other countries'). Use linking words like 'because' and expand briefly on what you learn (culture, history).

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they feel different from my daily life and reveal local culture. For example, visiting historical sites abroad helps me learn about local traditions and architecture.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because it's mainly because I liked I like capture the the atmosphere and then I can record my life and my mood as well show.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like capturing the atmosphere, and I can record my life and my mood as well.

Multiple issues: 'taking picture' uses count noun with 'taking' so plural 'pictures' is required (Singular and plural issue but fits verb+ -ing because '-ing' form 'taking' is fine; however the main correction targets 'capture' which should be 'capturing' to match 'like' + verb-ing. Remove repeated words and awkward structure. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb+ing and plural for countable nouns: 'like taking pictures' and 'like capturing the atmosphere'. Keep sentence concise.

× I prepare for you in Bulla area because is seems very peaceful and I can feel very relaxing from that peak view.

✓ I prefer the Bulla area because it seems very peaceful, and I feel very relaxed from that peak view.

Problems: 'I prepare for you' is incorrect verb choice and structure; 'is seems' duplicates and has wrong pronoun; 'I can feel very relaxing' uses 'relaxing' (adjective describing something) but speaker is feeling 'relaxed' (past participle/adjective). Correct structure: 'I prefer the Bulla area because it seems...' and 'I feel very relaxed.' Use 'the' with a specific area.

× So I I've I've I think I prepare you in Lula area much more Com calm.

✓ So I think the Lula area is much calmer.

Original has repetitions and unclear verbs. Use comparative 'calmer' to compare areas; include definite article 'the' before 'Lula area.' Remove extraneous filler words. Keep concise: 'I think the Lula area is much calmer.'

× I prefer beer in other country because it's mainly that you feel more different than daily daily life.

✓ I prefer being in another country because you mainly feel more different than in daily life.

Several issues: 'prefer beer' is likely misheard—'being' fits context (verb+ -ing acceptable) but instruction limits to listed types; here present tense/context: use 'prefer being in another country' and 'another country' not 'other country.' Also include 'in' before 'daily life' and remove duplicated word. Suggestion: use 'prefer being in another country' to express general preference.

× So and then I can imagine their culture and history.

✓ Then I can imagine their culture and history.

Minor issue: 'So and then' is redundant; drop 'so' to improve flow. Prepositions are fine here, but simplifying improves clarity. Keep 'their' to refer to people of the country.