Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp ý. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu bổ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích hoặc công cụ chụp). Tránh nối quá nhiều mệnh đề bằng 'and' để tự nhiên hơn. Chú ý phát âm 'scenery' và ngắt hơi hợp lý để tránh câu quá dài.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing coastal landscapes because the light at sunrise creates beautiful colours. I usually use my smartphone and sometimes a small tripod to get steady shots.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết rõ ràng, tránh tiếng ngập ngừng ('umm', 'uh') và hoàn thành câu (ở đây câu bị bỏ dở). Dùng liên từ hợp lý và mô tả cụ thể về cảm xúc, ví dụ so sánh mức độ yên tĩnh hoặc hoạt động bạn thích làm ở nông thôn. Rèn luyện nói mạch lạc, hô hấp và kết thúc câu rõ ràng.

Example: I prefer rural views because I find natural landscapes like mountains and rivers much more peaceful than the city. The fresh air and quiet help me relax, and I often go for walks or take photos of fields at sunset.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên và diễn đạt chính xác (ở đây có lỗi từ 'appropriate' và câu bị rời rạc). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với 1-2 ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ nêu lí do thích chỗ quen thuộc và ví dụ trải nghiệm mới ở nước ngoài). Hạn chế ngập ngừng và dùng từ phù hợp: 'appreciate' thay vì 'appropriate'.

Example: I enjoy both local and foreign views because they offer different experiences. I appreciate the comfort of familiar places at home, but travelling abroad gives me excitement and new perspectives, such as exploring historic streets or different coastal landscapes.

× Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel because it helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media and taking photos is a relaxing hobby for me.

✓ Absolutely. I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel because it helps me remember special moments and places. I also enjoy sharing my pictures on social media, and taking photos is a relaxing hobby for me.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple independent clauses joined only by commas. Break long sentences into shorter sentences or use conjunctions correctly to avoid comma splices. Suggestion: separate independent ideas into distinct sentences and use 'also' or a semicolon to connect closely related thoughts. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Umm, personally I like the view in rural areas, I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields and it is much more peaceful and relaxing and I really uh enjoy the fresh air in the country and I feel umm refresh when.

✓ Umm, personally I like views in rural areas. I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers, and fields. It is much more peaceful and relaxing, and I really enjoy the fresh air in the country. I feel refreshed there.

Multiple errors: 'the view' should be plural 'views' to match 'rural areas'; 'feel umm refresh when' uses incorrect form 'refresh' instead of adjective 'refreshed' and lacks an object/place. Also the original is run-on; split into sentences. Suggestion: use plural nouns to refer generally, use the adjective 'refreshed' for feelings, and complete the clause with a location or 'there'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× To be honest, I like both local and foreign scenery. Like each place uh has its own unique charm. So sometimes I appropriate comfort of family scenery while at the times I create the excitement of exploring uh, somewhere completely umm.

✓ To be honest, I like both local and foreign scenery because each place has its own unique charm. Sometimes I appreciate the comfort of family surroundings, while at other times I enjoy the excitement of exploring somewhere completely new.

Errors include incorrect word choice 'appropriate' instead of 'appreciate', awkward noun phrase 'family scenery' and 'at the times', and sentence fragments. Replace with correct verbs and nouns: 'appreciate' and 'family surroundings'; use 'at other times' for contrast and 'somewhere completely new' to finish the idea. Also merge short fragments for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26