Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and redundancy; give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') to make your reasoning coherent. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences and avoid fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'.

Example: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph city sunsets and family gatherings so I can look back on those moments later.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear choice and give 1–2 specific reasons connected with that choice. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' and avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g., 'be an Aries').

Example: I prefer urban views because cities offer more activities and convenience. For example, I can visit galleries, cafés and parks in one area, which makes it easy to explore and take varied photos.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and support it with specific examples and one concluding sentence. Use correct grammar for singular/plural and avoid repeating 'new' too often. Use linking phrases like 'for example' and 'because'.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover new cultures and landscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing foreign architecture and natural scenery such as mountains and rivers, which are different from what I see at home.

× I really like taking so many photos of my, uh, life that's give me some uh, ideas about how memories are going and umm, I think that uh, places will be saved in those pictures with the so many, uh, warm, uh.

✓ I really like taking many photos of my life; they give me ideas about how memories develop, and I think that places are preserved in those pictures with so many warm moments.

Original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and structures. 'that's give' mixes contraction with plural verb; it should be 'they give' (present simple) because 'photos' is plural. 'How memories are going' is unnatural; use 'how memories develop'. 'Will be saved' suggests future passive but the meaning is general; use 'are preserved'. Also remove fillers and fix word order. Suggestions: use plural pronoun 'they' for 'photos', prefer present simple for general truths, and use 'preserved' for passive meaning.

× So to be honest, I would prefer or be an Aries because I I feel like it's more comfortable and I can also like do so many things, imagine it and then practice it directly in the same moment.

✓ To be honest, I would prefer urban areas because I feel they are more comfortable, and I can do many things: imagine them and then practice immediately.

Original contains 'or be an Aries' which is unclear and likely a mischoice of words; corrected to 'urban areas' based on context. 'I I' is repetition; remove. 'Imagine it and then practice it directly in the same moment' has awkward prepositions and pronouns; use 'imagine them' (plural referring to areas) and 'practice immediately' for natural adverb placement. Suggestions: choose the correct noun (urban areas), avoid repeated words, match pronouns to plural nouns, and place adverbs ('immediately') after the verb.

× So of course I would choose another countries because that's the meaning of traveling.

✓ Of course I would choose another country because that's the meaning of traveling.

'Another' should modify a singular countable noun ('another country') not a plural noun. If plural intended, use 'other countries'. Choose 'another country' or 'other countries' depending on meaning. Suggestions: use 'another' + singular noun or 'other' + plural noun.

× You will discover a new places, a new culture with a new buildings and new areas such a forest, mountains, rivers and so on.

✓ You will discover new places, a new culture, new buildings, and new areas such as forests, mountains, rivers, and so on.

Mixes singular 'a new places' and plural nouns; articles and plural forms must agree. Use 'new places' (no 'a'), 'a new culture' is fine, 'new buildings' (no 'a'), and 'such a forest' should be 'such as forests' or 'such as a forest'. Also add commas for list clarity. Suggestions: ensure articles match noun number, use 'such as' for examples, and pluralize consistently.

× So I think that other countries will be the best ideas because.

✓ So I think that other countries would be the best choice.

'Best ideas' is incorrect collocation; use 'best choice'. The trailing 'because.' is incomplete; removed or complete the reason. Also 'will be' can be changed to 'would be' to match hypothetical preference. Suggestions: use appropriate collocations ('choice' not 'idea') and complete sentences; match modal tense to politeness ('would').