Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific supporting details (where and why). Reduce filler sounds (uh, you know) and avoid contradictory phrases. Use linking words if adding reasons.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenes. For example, I often photograph mountains and forests because the light and colors change throughout the day, which makes each photo unique.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference or say you have no strong preference, then support it with a reason and an example. Use coherent linking words (however, because, for example). Avoid repeating words and hesitations.

Example: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural landscapes and quiet settings. For example, I like photographing rivers and fields since they offer peaceful compositions, whereas urban scenes can feel crowded and busy.

Suggestion: Answer clearly—either say you prefer local views, foreign views, or both—and give specific reasons. Use one linking word to connect ideas (also, however) and provide a concrete example (a place you like or want to visit). Remove repetitions and filler words.

Example: I like views in both my country and abroad because each place offers different scenery and culture. For instance, I enjoy coastal landscapes at home, but I also want to visit Japan to photograph its temples and cherry blossoms.

× You know, actually, but I like to take a picture, uh, from, uh, different views, uh, in the nature. What about me or another people? I don't like to take picture. No, I like to take picture, uh, in the nature.

✓ Actually, I like to take pictures of different scenes in nature. I don't like taking pictures of people.

The original contains multiple sentence structure issues and article/plural errors. Use plural 'pictures' for general activity (Grammar IDs 1 and 22). 'In the nature' is incorrect; use 'in nature' (Grammar ID 11/22). 'What about me or another people?' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended to say they do not like photographing people, so change to 'I don't like taking pictures of people.' Also change 'to take picture' to 'to take pictures' and use gerund 'taking' after 'like' for natural phrasing (Grammar ID 8). Suggestions: simplify sentences, use plural nouns for general activities, remove unnecessary fillers, and use correct prepositions 'in nature' and 'of people'.

× Uh, you know, uh, every area is, uh, the unique has the, has the unique, uh, uh, has the unique. Perspective, that's the unit scenery and you know every is beautiful.

✓ Every area has its own unique perspective and scenery, and each is beautiful.

Original sentence has repetition and broken structure. Use possessive 'its own' to indicate ownership (Grammar ID 12/26). 'Every area is the unique has the...' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'Every area has its own unique perspective and scenery' — 'scenery' is uncountable, so no article is needed (Grammar ID 22/17). Replace 'every is beautiful' with 'each is beautiful' for clarity and agreement (Grammar ID 1/27). Suggestions: remove filler words, use concise clause 'has its own', and match subjects with verbs.

× Every every country has unique views and I like my current reviews and you know, I like to to watch another views in another country and I decided to go trip and see the debut.

✓ Every country has unique views, and I like the views in my country. I also like to see views in other countries, and I decided to go on a trip to see them.

Multiple grammatical problems: 'Every every' repetition removed and 'has unique views' is fine (Grammar ID 1). 'My current reviews' is incorrect: likely 'the views in my country' (incorrect word choice and possessive) (Grammar ID 12/13). 'Watch another views' should be 'see views in other countries' — 'views' plural and 'other' not 'another' (Grammar ID 1/19). 'Go trip' needs 'go on a trip' (preposition article error, Grammar IDs 11 and 22). 'See the debut' is meaningless here; changed to 'see them' referring to views. Suggestions: choose correct nouns ('views' not 'reviews'), use 'other' with plural nouns, use 'go on a trip', and ensure pronouns refer clearly to nouns.