Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your response with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words (e.g., "like", "umm"). Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas and give a brief example to illustrate your point. Keep your answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Example: I don’t usually take photos of views because I prefer to enjoy them directly. For example, when I visit a mountain or a beach I focus on the atmosphere and sounds rather than my camera, because that helps me remember the experience more vividly.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give two concise and specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "and"). Avoid redundant phrases and vague language like "they basically". Limit to 3 sentences and include a short example or contrast with urban views to strengthen your answer.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they have more greenery and peaceful scenery. For instance, walking through a countryside trail helps me relax and forget city noise, whereas urban views often feel crowded and stressful.

Suggestion: Make a clear, grammatical topic sentence and give a specific reason and a concrete example. Avoid hesitations ("umm") and vague or awkward phrases ("better theory"). Use one linking phrase such as "because" or "for example" and keep to 2–3 sentences. Mention one country and one clear reason why you prefer its views.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they often protect and showcase natural landscapes better than mine. For example, Switzerland has well-preserved mountains and scenic viewpoints where trails and lookouts make it easy to enjoy the scenery.

× I do not like taking pictures of different views because I think it is better to just see that view with your own eye without actually like taking pictures of it because I think it is better in it is the only way to appreciate the the view and in that way you can see that picture we can picture.

✓ I do not like taking pictures of views because I think it is better to see them with your own eyes without taking photos; it is the only way to truly appreciate the scene.

The original sentence has run-on structure, repetition ('the the', 'picture we can picture'), and awkward phrases ('your own eye', 'actually like taking pictures of it'). Combine ideas into clearer clauses, use plural agreement for 'views' and 'eyes', remove filler words, and replace informal 'like' with the verb 'taking'. Suggest using a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid a run-on.

× I prefer the views in rural areas because they contain more greenery and better scenery, rather than urban areas because rural areas, they help me relax and they basically give relaxation to people and help them calm and then yeah.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have more greenery and better scenery than urban areas; rural areas help me relax and calm down.

Problems: redundant phrases ('they contain', 'because rural areas, they'), informal fillers ('and then yeah'), and awkward verb choice 'contain' for scenery. Use 'have' for possession, compare with 'than' not 'rather than' in this structure, and avoid repeating the subject. Condense to a clear comparative sentence and use 'calm down' or 'relax' rather than 'give relaxation'.

× I prefer reviews in other countries because I believe that this country is not really the type to umm treasure landscapes and beautiful sceneries, rather than in other countries such as Switzerland which has better view and better theory in which I can really appreciate because it is umm.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I believe that my country does not really appreciate landscapes and beautiful scenery, whereas countries like Switzerland have better views that I can really appreciate.

Errors: 'reviews' is wrong word (should be 'views'); 'sceneries' is nonstandard—use 'scenery' (uncountable); 'this country is not really the type to ...' is ungrammatical—use 'my country does not really appreciate'; 'view' should be plural 'views'; 'better theory' is incorrect word choice. Correct noun number and word choice, and use 'whereas' to contrast. Remove fillers and incomplete clause at the end.