Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and redundancy, use clearer sentence structure and more precise vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details, using linking words for coherence. Also correct collocations (e.g., 'take photographs of scenery' not 'a photographing of a scenic scenery') and plural/singular forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph coastal cliffs and city skylines, and then I share the best shots on social media, where friends usually leave comments and suggestions.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'in rural areas', 'the weather is fresher', 'mountain landscapes'). Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words to connect ideas. Reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'to uh'.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because the mountains and rivers create a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy watching spectacular sunsets over mountain landscapes, and the air is much fresher than in cities.

Suggestion: The answer repeats the previous response and does not address the question about own country versus other countries. First, state a clear preference (own country or abroad), then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating prior phrasing. Keep responses concise and coherent.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural scenery. For example, visiting New Zealand allowed me to photograph unique mountain lakes and different coastal formations that I don't see at home.

× Yes, I like uh, taking pictures of different views when I travel. I love a photographing of a scenic scenery and uh, I love uh, sharing them with my friends on social media where they often leave comment.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I travel. I love photographing scenic scenery, and I also enjoy sharing the photos with my friends on social media, where they often leave comments.

The sentence contains unnecessary article and word choice errors and a countability issue: 'a photographing' is incorrect because 'photographing' as a verb/gerund does not take the indefinite article; use 'photographing' or 'taking photographs'. 'Scenic scenery' is redundant; use 'scenic scenery' is acceptable but better to use 'scenic views' or just 'scenery'. 'Sharing them' is fine but clarify 'the photos'. 'Leave comment' is wrong because 'comment' is countable and requires plural 'comments' or an article. Suggestion: remove filler 'uh', drop the unnecessary 'a', use 'photographing' or 'taking photographs', replace 'scenic scenery' with 'scenic scenery' or 'scenic views', and change 'leave comment' to 'leave comments'.

× I love a photographing of a scenic scenery and uh, I love uh, sharing them with my friends on social media where they often leave comment.

✓ I love photographing scenic views, and I enjoy sharing the photos with my friends on social media, where they often leave comments.

The phrase 'a photographing of a scenic scenery' incorrectly uses the article 'a' with the gerund 'photographing' and repeats 'scenic' and 'scenery'. Use 'photographing scenic views' or 'taking photographs of scenery'. Also 'leave comment' should be 'leave comments' because 'comment' is a countable noun and plural is needed when referring to multiple responses. Improve word choice and remove redundant words.

× I love a photographing of a scenic scenery and uh, I love uh, sharing them with my friends on social media where they often leave comment.

✓ I love photographing scenic scenery, and I enjoy sharing the photos with my friends on social media, where they often leave comments.

There is a pluralization problem: 'comment' should be 'comments' to match 'they often leave' (plural). Also 'them' refers to photos (plural), so use 'the photos' or keep 'them' but ensure 'comment' is plural. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so do not use 'a' before it.

× I prefer views in a rural areas because of the mountain and rivers and the weather is more fresher than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because of the mountains and rivers, and the weather is fresher than in urban areas.

Incorrect preposition and article use: use 'in rural areas' not 'in a rural areas' (article mismatch). Also 'than urban areas' should be 'than in urban areas' for parallel structure. 'Because of the mountain and rivers' needs plural 'mountains' and can omit 'the' unless referring to specific ones. Remove extra comparative 'more' with 'fresher' because 'fresher' already conveys comparison; say 'is fresher than'.

× I prefer views in a rural areas because of the mountain and rivers and the weather is more fresher than urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because of the mountains and rivers, and the weather is fresher than in urban areas.

Multiple number errors: 'a rural areas' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'areas'—remove 'a'. 'the mountain and rivers' mixes singular and plural; use 'the mountains and rivers' or just 'mountains and rivers'. Use 'fresher' not 'more fresher' (double comparative).

× Uh, I love uh to uh watching uh the sunset and the mountains landscape.

✓ I love watching the sunset and the mountain landscape.

After 'love' when expressing a general preference use the gerund: 'love watching', not 'love to watching' or 'love to watch ... watching'. Remove filler words 'uh'. 'mountains landscape' should be 'mountain landscape' or 'mountain landscapes'—use singular 'mountain landscape' or plural 'mountain landscapes' depending on meaning. Also remove extra 'the' before 'mountains' if switching to plural.

× the weather is more fresher than urban areas.

✓ the weather is fresher than in urban areas.

This uses a double comparative 'more fresher' which is incorrect. Use either 'more fresh' or 'fresher'—the correct comparative is 'fresher'. Also add 'in' before 'urban areas' for clarity and parallel structure.