Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid fillers and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence: say you enjoy photography of views, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary ("queens in the sky" is unclear) and limit to 2–4 sentences. Also vary sentence structure and remove hesitation words like "um" and repeated phrases.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like dramatic skies and city skylines because the light and colors change quickly, giving interesting photo opportunities.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and expand with specific details and a linking word. Avoid minor grammar errors ("I appreciate more on rural areas" → "I prefer rural areas"). Provide an example or brief reason why rural scenes appeal to you, within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they tend to be more colorful and peaceful. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small farms where natural light and open space create relaxing compositions.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer first, then one clear reason with a concrete example. Remove repeated words and correct grammar ("other country" → "other countries"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "however" or "also" when comparing. State what you hope to see abroad specifically (architecture, landscapes, culture).

Example: I prefer seeing views in other countries because I want to experience different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would love to photograph coastal cliffs in Portugal and ancient temples in Japan to capture styles and light I've never seen at home.

× I do love taking pictures of different views, of course.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, of course.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary for emphasis with 'love' in affirmative statements; use simple present 'I love' plus gerund 'taking'. Remove 'do' to sound natural and grammatically correct.

× I love the Queens in the sky and any, any view that would, uh, catch my eyes, it's, it's, it's probably really great to see.

✓ I love the clouds in the sky and any view that catches my eye; it's probably really great to see.

'Queens' is incorrect contextually; 'clouds' likely intended. Use present simple 'catches' for habitual action (subject-verb agreement). 'Catch my eyes' should be singular 'catch my eye'. Combine clauses with a semicolon or coordinating conjunction for clarity and remove filler repetitions.

× I do appreciate more on rural areas than urban areas because rural areas are more colorful, serene and calm than the urban areas.

✓ I appreciate rural areas more than urban areas because rural areas are more colorful, serene, and calm than urban areas.

Do not use 'appreciate on'; the correct structure is 'appreciate X more than Y'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'urban areas' for general reference and place 'more' correctly after the verb. Add Oxford comma for clarity.

× As much I, as much as I want to see the view in here in my country, I do appreciate seeing more of this world.

✓ As much as I want to see the views here in my country, I appreciate seeing more of the world.

Correct phrasing is 'As much as I want' and placement of 'as' matters. Use plural 'views' and remove extraneous 'in' ('here in my country' -> 'here in my country' simplified). Remove unnecessary 'do' auxiliary with 'appreciate'. Use 'the world' instead of 'this world' for natural usage.

× It means I, I, I really love to go to other country to see what other country, what or what other place have to deliver.

✓ It means I really love to go to other countries to see what other places have to offer.

Use plural 'countries' and 'places' when speaking generally. Replace 'have to deliver' with the correct collocation 'have to offer'. Remove repeated fillers and the infinitive 'to go' is fine but match nouns to plural for generalization.