Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve fluency and reduce hesitations; give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar (e.g. say “taking photographs helps me” instead of “are helps me”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I love taking photos when I travel because they help me remember places and local culture. For example, I often photograph street markets and traditional buildings to capture the atmosphere, so I can look back and recall the exact feeling of that trip.

Suggestion: Make a clear direct answer first (e.g. “I prefer rural views”) then give one or two specific reasons with linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid vague phrases and grammatical errors such as “no such beauties” and awkward comparisons.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy photographing mountains, rivers and small villages, which offer colours and textures you rarely see in busy cities.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer (e.g. “I prefer views in my own country”) and give concrete examples and a reason. Use correct word forms (e.g. “beauty” not “beauties” repeated) and clearer linking language like “for example” or “because.”

Example: I prefer the views in my own country because we have amazing places nearby. For example, I love photographing Manali and the Himalayas, as well as forests and rivers, since they show the natural beauty and local culture I want to remember.

× Yes, I do. Uh, when, whenever I'm traveling, I, I will, I am taking pictures of the sceneries and culture and, uh, the photographs and taking photographs are, uh, helps me to remember the exact exact feeling and culture of that photo.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel, I take pictures of the scenery and culture. Photographs help me remember the exact feeling and culture captured in the photo.

Errors: incorrect progressive and future mix ('I will, I am taking') and unnecessary repetition; incorrect noun form 'sceneries' and subject-verb agreement with 'photographs ... are, helps'. Suggestions: Use simple present 'I take' for habitual actions; use uncountable singular 'scenery'; match plural subject with plural verb 'photographs help'; remove filler words and repetitions for clarity.

× I think the views and sceneries in rural areas are very different from the urban areas because there is no such beauties and sceneries in urban areas which in rural areas.

✓ I think the views and scenery in rural areas are very different from those in urban areas because there are no such beauties and scenery in urban areas as in rural areas.

Errors: wrong preposition/structure 'different from the urban areas' and awkward comparative clause 'which in rural areas'; wrong plural/uncountable 'sceneries' and 'there is no such beauties' (agreement). Suggestions: Use 'different from' and refer back with 'those'; use uncountable 'scenery' or 'scenic views'; ensure verb agrees with subject: 'there are no such ... as'.

× Basically there are such beauties and beauties in my country such like Manali and Himalaya's beauty and other forest areas and rivers. So I would like to explore these beauties among.

✓ Basically, my country has many beautiful places, such as Manali, the Himalayas, forests, and rivers, so I would like to explore them.

Errors: repetitive phrasing 'beauties and beauties', incorrect 'such like', incorrect possessive 'Himalaya's beauty', and awkward final 'explore these beauties among'. Suggestions: Use concise noun phrases 'beautiful places' and 'such as' for examples; use 'the Himalayas' (plural name) and refer back with pronoun 'them'; combine clauses for smoother flow.