Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and fillers, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. For example, mention what kinds of views you prefer and why.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes when I travel because wide views capture the atmosphere of a place, such as misty mountains or bustling waterfronts.

Suggestion: Eliminate hesitations and repetition, and give a clear reason with a specific detail. Use a linking word (for example, because or so) to connect your reason to the topic sentence.

Example: I prefer rural views because they feel more natural and peaceful; for example, I like photographing open fields and traditional villages where the scenery feels untouched.

Suggestion: Complete the answer and avoid filler words. Give a direct statement followed by a specific reason or example. Use linking words like because or since to make the response coherent and provide one concrete detail.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best locations and seasons for photography, such as coastal areas in spring when the light and colors are at their best.

× Yes, I'd like to take a picture in different views while I'm traveling around.

✓ Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views while I'm traveling around.

The original sentence uses 'a picture' with 'different views', which is inconsistent: 'different views' implies multiple photos. This is a count/number agreement issue best treated as a plural noun correction (fits 'Verb + -ing form' only if the verb form were wrong). However, based on the allowed list, the clear fix is to change 'a picture' to 'pictures' to match 'different views'. Also change 'in different views' to the natural preposition 'of different views'. Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' and 'of' as the preposition: 'take pictures of different views'.

× I I mostly like to like the view in uh rural area because it is, uh, very natural.

✓ I mostly like the views in rural areas because they are very natural.

The original has repetition 'I I mostly like to like', wrong article and number: 'the view in uh rural area' should be plural or use the article 'a rural area' depending on meaning. When speaking generally, use plural: 'views in rural areas'. Pronoun/verb agreement: replace 'it is' with 'they are' to match plural 'views'. Also remove filler repetitions. Suggestion: say 'I mostly like the views in rural areas because they are very natural.'

× Actually, uh, I like, I prefer to view in my own country and, uh, because.

✓ Actually, I prefer to view landscapes in my own country because I know them better.

The original is fragmented and unfinished ('and, uh, because.'), and uses awkward verb 'prefer to view' and missing object. This is a sentence structure error: you must complete the thought and use a clear object: 'view landscapes' or 'see the scenery'. Also remove unnecessary repetition 'I like, I prefer'. Suggestion: complete the reason after 'because' and use a natural verb-object pairing: 'I prefer to view landscapes in my own country because I know them better.'