Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (use 'views' not 'viewers' or 'the wheel' if you mean 'waterfall' or 'sunsets') and reduce repetition. Also avoid short fragmented sentences by combining ideas into coherent statements.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially mountains and lakes, because they change with the light. For example, I often take photos of a lake at sunset since the colours and reflections are particularly beautiful.

Suggestion: Give a direct concise answer and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid double negatives or informal grammar ('Neither urban has got nothing'). Use varied vocabulary ('coast', 'countryside').

Example: I prefer rural areas because they offer natural scenery such as coasts, lakes and mountains. For example, the countryside usually has quieter spots and wide-open views that I find more relaxing than busy city streets.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organise your ideas. Start with a clear statement (I like both), then briefly explain why, giving specific examples and linking phrases. Correct place names and avoid filler words. Use clearer vocabulary ("I have visited").

Example: I like views in both my country and abroad. For instance, Turkey has beautiful cityscapes in places like Istanbul, while Germany and Switzerland offer impressive mountain scenery, so I enjoy both types of views.

× I like taking pictures from different viewers because I love the wheel, the mountains, sun especially.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I especially love the wheel, the mountains, and the sun.

Original uses 'viewers' (people) instead of 'views' (scenes) and has awkward word order and missing conjunctions. This is a vocabulary/word-choice issue that affects verb phrase 'taking pictures of'. Use 'of' with 'take pictures of'. Add 'and' before the last item and move 'especially' before the thing it emphasizes for clarity.

× Like rural areas have sea, lakes, mountains.

✓ Rural areas have seas, lakes, and mountains.

List items need plural or consistent forms. Use plural 'seas' if referring generally, add commas and 'and' before the final item for correct coordination. No '-ing' correction required but this fits present participle/list construction clarity.

× Neither urban has got nothing of them.

✓ Urban areas do not have any of those features.

Original uses a double negative ('Neither' + 'nothing') and incorrect subject form. Replace with a clear negative construction: 'do not have any' to express absence. Also use 'urban areas' as subject and correct verb form 'do not have'.

× Actually, but because in my country we have beautiful views in cities like Mula, Kershaw here, Istanbul, and I've been to other countries too and also the website that country too, like Germany, Switzerland.

✓ Actually, in my country we have beautiful views in cities like Mula, Kershaw, and Istanbul. I have been to other countries too, such as Germany and Switzerland, which also have beautiful scenery.

Original sentence is run-on and contains unclear phrase 'the website that country' and redundant connectors ('actually, but because'). Break into two sentences, remove irrelevant words, use 'such as' for examples, and correct tense 'I have been' for present perfect experience. Clarify meaning and sentence boundaries.

× And they're they are both goods.

✓ They are both good.

Use adjective 'good' rather than noun 'goods' to describe 'views'. Remove redundant repetition 'they're they are'. Simple subject-verb-adjective structure is appropriate: 'They are both good.'

× So yeah, I choose both. Both views are good.

✓ So yes, I would choose both; both types of views are good.

'So yeah' is informal; use 'so yes' or 'I would choose both' to fit speaking-test register. Clarify 'both' by specifying 'both types of views'. Maintain consistent modal/tense: 'would choose' expresses preference.