Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use plural/singular and articles), and avoid redundancy. Add a brief specific example with linking words. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different landscapes. For example, when I travel to the mountains I often photograph sunrise scenes so I can remember the colors and peaceful feeling when I look back at the pictures.

Suggestion: Clarify comparisons and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (articles, verb forms). Provide one specific reason and an example. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because the countryside is quieter and less crowded. For instance, after a busy week in the city I like walking through open fields and breathing fresh air because it helps me relax and recharge.

Suggestion: Fix grammar and vocabulary, be specific about landscapes, and use linking words. Correct pluralization and word choice, and give a concrete example of a place you like. Keep answers concise and coherent.

Example: Although I have traveled a lot for work, I prefer views in my own country. For example, Vietnam has diverse landscapes from terraced rice fields and limestone karst mountains to long sandy coasts, and these familiar scenes feel more memorable and relaxing to me.

× Yes, I do like taking snapshot of different landscape through different lands because whenever I'm going on a trip I just want to freeze the moment to look back when I'm coming home for example.

✓ Yes, I do like taking snapshots of different landscapes in different places because whenever I go on a trip I just want to freeze the moment to look back on when I come home, for example.

Errors: 'taking snapshot' needs plural 'snapshots' and 'different landscape' needs plural 'landscapes' (singular/plural issue). Use 'in different places' instead of 'through different lands' for natural preposition and word choice (incorrect use of prepositions). 'I'm going on a trip' should be simple present when describing habitual actions: 'I go on a trip' or better 'whenever I go on a trip' (present tense issue). 'to look back when I'm coming home' is awkward: use 'to look back on when I come home' (preposition and tense). Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns, use 'whenever I go' for habitual meaning, use 'look back on' as the correct phrasal verb, and prefer 'places' or 'areas' over 'lands' in this context.

× I prefer rural areas to open area because the countryside is quieter and less crowded.

✓ I prefer rural areas to open areas because the countryside is quieter and less crowded.

Error: 'open area' should be plural 'open areas' to match 'rural areas' and because plural comparison is natural here (singular and plural issue / preposition usage). Also maintaining parallel plural nouns improves clarity. Suggestion: keep both nouns in the comparison plural when speaking generally.

× I enjoy the open fields and fresh air, which help me realize after a busy week in the city the peaceful atmosphere in the slower pace make it easier for.

✓ I enjoy the open fields and fresh air, which help me relax after a busy week in the city; the peaceful atmosphere and slower pace make it easier to do so.

Errors: sentence is ungrammatical and missing a clear verb and object (sentence structure errors). 'help me realize' is incorrect here — 'help me relax' fits the intended meaning. 'the peaceful atmosphere in the slower pace make it easier for' has subject-verb disagreement and is incomplete. Correct to 'the peaceful atmosphere and slower pace make it easier to do so.' Suggestions: use a concise main clause ('help me relax') and then a second clause with correct subject-verb agreement ('atmosphere and pace make').

× Thanks to my job I have traveled a lot, but I prefer views in my own country. Vietnam have many beautiful landscapes from tourist variety fields and rocket mountains to long sandy coast and I find the signals more memorable and relaxing.

✓ Thanks to my job I have traveled a lot, but I prefer views in my own country. Vietnam has many beautiful landscapes, from varied tourist areas and rocky mountains to long sandy coasts, and I find the scenes more memorable and relaxing.

Errors: 'Vietnam have' should be 'Vietnam has' (subject-verb agreement). 'tourist variety fields' is incorrect word order and choice; use 'varied tourist areas' (word order/adjective choice). 'rocket mountains' likely intended 'rocky mountains' (word choice). 'long sandy coast' should be plural 'long sandy coasts' or 'a long sandy coast' depending on meaning (singular/plural issue). 'signals' is wrong word; 'scenes' fits context (incorrect use of vocabulary). Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree ('Vietnam has'), choose correct adjectives and nouns ('varied', 'rocky', 'scenes'), and keep number consistent for lists (plural forms for multiple types).