Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và mạch lạc; nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai (ví dụ 'Shira', 'beautifulness') và lúng túng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ nơi chụp, lý do, cảm xúc). Tránh tiếng ồ ồ và sử dụng từ phù hợp (beautiful, scenery, collection). Tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để nối ý.

Example: Absolutely. I love taking pictures of landscapes because they help me remember special places. For example, I often photograph mountain views near my home, especially at sunrise, because the light is beautiful and calming.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không trả lời trực tiếp và có nhiều từ sai/không phù hợp ('blue area', 'IT have me unwind', 'deep reference'). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu khẳng định ngắn (I prefer rural/urban views), rồi giải thích rõ lý do với 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' và tránh ngập ngừng.

Example: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and the scenery is more natural. For instance, I enjoy walking by rice fields and rivers which helps me relax after a busy week.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu nội dung, ngắt quãng và khó hiểu; không trả lời câu hỏi rõ ràng (own country vs other countries). Hãy đưa ra câu chủ đề nêu rõ lựa chọn (own country/other countries), kèm lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ cụ thể về địa điểm hoặc trải nghiệm. Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng từ chính xác (e.g., 'national park', 'domestic', 'abroad').

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and I feel more connected to them. For example, I often visit our national park nearby, where the mountains and forests are stunning and easy to access.

× I meant to say absolutely yes.

✓ I meant to say 'absolutely yes.'

The sentence is understandable but awkward; it needs punctuation and placement of the quoted reply. Suggestion: place the phrase being affirmed in quotes or rephrase to 'Absolutely, I do.' to sound more natural.

× I really enjoy Shira captured the beautifulness of the nature around me.

✓ I really enjoy the beauty of the nature around me.

'Beautifulness' is nonstandard; use 'beauty'. The original mixes past-tense clause 'Shira captured' incorrectly with present 'enjoy'. Remove the incorrect clause or rephrase: 'I really enjoy the beauty of the nature around me.'

× I will collect, uh, the pictures in the collection as well.

✓ I will also collect pictures for the collection.

Redundant article 'the' and awkward word order. Use 'collect pictures' and place 'also' appropriately: 'I will also collect pictures for the collection.'

× By speaking I prefer umm it is a blue area because I think the scenery is so good and I can easily enjoy the IT have me unwind.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the scenery is beautiful and they help me unwind.

Original is fragmented and includes filler words and unclear phrases ('blue area', 'the IT have me unwind'). Condense to a clear subject and verb: 'I prefer rural areas because the scenery is beautiful and they help me unwind.'

× But I have a deep reference.

✓ But I have a strong preference.

'Reference' is the wrong word; 'preference' is correct. Also 'deep preference' is unnatural; use 'strong preference.'

× I think I refer you in my.

✓ I think I prefer the ones in my country.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear ('refer you in my'). Reconstruct to express preference: 'I think I prefer the ones in my country.'

× A real fly that you know, a coupon coupon National Park, uh.

✓ For example, a national park near my home.

Original contains fragments and repetition ('coupon coupon'), likely attempts to name an example. Provide a clear, simple example: 'For example, a national park near my home.'