Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and pronouns, and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Use linking words (because, so) appropriately and give a specific example of what you photograph and why.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes because they help me remember places I have visited, and I especially like capturing sunsets as a souvenir of my trips.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear preference statement, use correct comparative structures and improve vocabulary (clean, fresh, green). Use linking words such as "because" and "however" and provide one specific detail to support your preference.

Example: I prefer rural views because the countryside feels cleaner and fresher, with wide green fields and fewer people. However, urban views can be interesting for architecture and nightlife, so I sometimes enjoy both for different reasons.

Suggestion: Make a direct, grammatically correct statement and give specific reasons. Correct vocabulary (delightful, famous, costly) and simplify sentence structures. Mention one or two concrete examples of places in your country to make the answer more vivid.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India has many famous historical sites and beautiful modern places, such as the Taj Mahal and local hill stations. Also, travelling domestically is cheaper and easier, so I visit my country’s sights more often.

× That's definitely I like photography, so that Skype and I visited some places, I usually get your pictures, uh, because there it is a kind of a memory and also it helps me to remind my past memory.

✓ I definitely like photography, so when I travel and visit places I usually take pictures because they are a way to keep memories and help me remember the past.

Original sentence has unclear structure, wrong word choices (Skype, get your pictures), and redundant phrases. Fix by reorganizing into clear clauses: state preference, describe when (when I travel and visit places), give reason (they are a way to keep memories and help me remember the past). Use correct verbs (take pictures) and remove unnecessary fillers.

× I like 3 Rook areas with views because in rural areas they feel is clean and fresh and apart from this the crops are really greenery and there is a greenery in the countryside area.

✓ I like rural areas with views because they feel clean and fresh; the crops are very green and the countryside is full of greenery.

Sentence contains wrong words (3 Rook), incorrect grammar ('they feel is'), and adjective/adverb misuse ('really greenery'). Correct by using 'rural', correct adjective 'green' and phrase 'full of greenery'. Keep subject-verb agreement and natural word order.

× But on the other hand urban areas are don't have enough trees and more population and pollution can occur.

✓ But on the other hand, urban areas do not have enough trees, and they have higher population and more pollution.

Original mixes 'are' with 'don't' creating subject-verb agreement error. Use 'do not have' or 'don't have' with plural subject. Also clarify 'more population' to 'higher population' and connect ideas with commas; add a subject for the second clause.

× In my country there are lots of special places and the derived visited the most because India is a Finlay for many historical buildings as well as new places.

✓ In my country there are many special places that are visited the most because India is famous for many historical buildings as well as new attractions.

Errors: 'the derived visited the most' is incorrect; 'Finlay' is wrong word, likely 'famous'. Fix prepositions and collocations: 'famous for', 'visited the most', and replace 'new places' with 'new attractions' for natural phrasing.

× So that's why I prefer to build in my own country's places rather than other country because it takes more cost.

✓ So that's why I prefer to visit places in my own country rather than other countries, because visiting abroad costs more.

Original uses 'prefer to build in my own country's places' which is incorrect verb and structure. Use 'prefer to visit places in my own country rather than other countries'. Also 'it takes more cost' is ungrammatical; use 'costs more' or 'is more expensive' to express cost comparison.