Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and avoid hesitation sounds (umm, uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct factual slips (e.g., 'bank' sounds odd in context) and use more natural collocations like 'capture memories' or 'take photos'. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they help me capture memories. For example, last month I visited a historic site and took many pictures to remember the trip. I like experimenting with angles and lighting to make the photos more interesting.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct clear answer (e.g., 'I prefer rural views.') and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, however) and give specific reasons or examples. Improve grammar (articles: 'rural areas', 'an urban area') and use natural verbs like 'take photos' or 'photograph'. Limit to up to 4 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and offer more natural scenery. For instance, I often travel to nearby villages to photograph fields and old cottages, which I find more peaceful and visually appealing than the city.

Suggestion: Give a concise, structured answer: state the general preference, then explain conditions using linking phrases (if, but, however). Fix grammar and time expressions ('one-week break', 'one-month holiday') and avoid repetition. Provide a specific example of what you would do in each case.

Example: It depends on how much time I have. If I only have a one-week break, I prefer visiting places in my own country because travel is quicker; however, if I have a month off, I would travel abroad to explore different landscapes and take photos of new cultures.

× I like taking pictures of different views, umm, it creates, uh, memories and uh, I remember, uh, last month I went to a bank and I clicked a lot, a lot of pictures to uh, makemytrip memorable.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views; it creates memories. I remember last month I went to a bank and took many pictures to make my trip memorable.

The sentence misuses gerunds and verb forms: 'click' is informal and in past tense should be 'took'; 'makemytrip' should be separated and is intended as 'make my trip'. Also remove filler words and use punctuation to join clauses correctly. Use 'taking' correctly as a gerund for 'like', and 'took' as the simple past tense verb for the completed action.

× I uh prefer views, uh, in rural area uh, because the uh, the beauty of the rural area is uh, attracts the view and, but I am living in a urban area so I always prefer to go in the rural areas and click the pictures and see the beauty.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the beauty of the countryside is attractive, but I live in an urban area, so I prefer to go to rural areas to take pictures and see the scenery.

Article and noun number errors: use plural 'rural areas' or 'the rural area'; 'a urban area' should be 'an urban area' because 'urban' begins with a vowel sound. 'The beauty... is attracts the view' mixes forms; use 'is attractive' or 'attracts viewers'. Also 'click the pictures' is informal; use 'take pictures'. Adjust prepositions: 'go to rural areas'.

× Well it's all depend upon the situation.

✓ Well, it all depends on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'depend' should be third person singular 'depends' to match subject 'it'. Use 'on' rather than 'upon' for natural phrasing, though 'upon' is possible; include comma after 'Well'.

× I get a one week day off or a for a month if I got a one day one week day off.

✓ If I get one weekday off or a month off,...

The original is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use conditional structure: 'If I get one weekday off or a month off,' which is clear. Remove duplicated words and incorrect word order ('one day one week day'). Ensure consistent article use: 'one weekday' or 'a month'.

× So I prefer to visit in my own country but instead of I get a one month day off.

✓ So I prefer to visit my own country if I get only one weekday off, but if I get a month off,

Tense and structure: 'prefer to visit in my own country' should be 'visit my own country'. The clause 'instead of I get a one month day off' is incorrect; use a clear conditional 'if I get a month off'. Also 'one month day' is wrong; use 'a month off'.

× So then I prefer to other countries to visit and click all to see all the views.

✓ then I prefer to visit other countries and take pictures of the sights.

Use correct verb pattern 'prefer to visit' or 'prefer visiting'; 'prefer to other countries to visit' is incorrect word order. 'Click all to see all the views' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'take pictures of the sights' or 'see the views'.