Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the sentence grammatically correct and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and add a brief reason or example. Use correct verb forms and word order.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking photographs of different places because it helps me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph parks and city streets when I travel because the light and colors change throughout the day.

Suggestion: Give a clear, concise preference sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and vague words like “smooth.” Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make your answer coherent.

Example: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the diverse architecture and busy streets. For example, I like photographing tall buildings, busy markets, and colorful street scenes, which offer interesting details and contrasts.

Suggestion: Answer directly and politely; avoid negative or incorrect grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give reasons with specific details and linkers. Mention specific features you like about the other country’s views (architecture, rivers, parks) rather than vague statements about people.

Example: I prefer views in other countries, especially London, because of its historic architecture and the River Thames. For instance, I love photographing landmarks like the Houses of Parliament and the riverside at sunset, which create dramatic compositions.

× Yes, I like so much to taking pictures in different, uh, areas.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures in different areas.

The verb 'like' is followed by the base form or gerund; 'to taking' is incorrect. Remove 'to' and use the gerund 'taking'. Also 'so much' is unnatural here; place it after the verb ('I like taking pictures so much') or omit it. Remove the extra comma and filler 'uh'.

× I prefer urban areas because urban areas are smooth and uh, very big landscape.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have wide, open landscapes.

'Smooth' is not appropriate to describe areas; 'very big landscape' is ungrammatical. Use adjectives that collocate with 'landscapes' such as 'wide' or 'open' and make subject reference consistent ('they' for 'urban areas'). Remove filler 'uh'.

× Uh, I very appreciated urban areas and uh, prefer urban areas.

✓ I really appreciate urban areas and prefer them.

'I very appreciated' mixes tense and adverb placement; 'appreciate' is present simple and the adverb 'really' should modify it. Use the pronoun 'them' to avoid repeating 'urban areas'. Remove fillers 'uh'.

× No, my country haven't a good view.

✓ No, my country doesn't have good views.

'Country' is singular, so use 'doesn't' (do-support for negative). 'Haven't' is plural/informal. Also 'a good view' is odd for a country; use plural 'views' or 'many good views'.

× I prefer London because London is my favorite place and it's buildings are very beautiful.

✓ I prefer London because it is my favorite place and its buildings are very beautiful.

Use 'it' instead of repeating 'London'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' or 'it has', not the possessive; the possessive is 'its'. Replace 'it's' with 'its'.

× People are very good in large buildings. River.

✓ People are very proud of the large buildings and the river.

The original fragment 'People are very good in large buildings. River.' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely meaning is that people appreciate or are proud of large buildings and the river; restructure the sentence to combine the ideas and use a verb that fits ('proud of' or 'fond of').