Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitation words and small grammar mistakes (e.g., "not that picture perfectionist" → "not a perfectionist about photos").

Example: I don't usually worry about taking perfect photos; I prefer to enjoy the view in person. However, I do take a few pictures to keep as memories, especially when a scene is special or I am traveling.

Suggestion: Organize the answer: give a clear preference sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct contradictory phrasing (you said rural is more beautiful but then described urban as peaceful). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "peaceful" for rural, "noisy" for urban).

Example: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and scenic. For example, I enjoy open fields and forests where I can relax without traffic noise, whereas cities are often crowded and noisy.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first (e.g., I prefer places that are peaceful, regardless of the country), then add a specific reason and possibly an example. Avoid vague phrases and finish your sentences cleanly.

Example: I don't mind whether the view is in my country or abroad; I prefer places that offer peace and quiet. For instance, a quiet seaside town in another country can be just as enjoyable as a remote countryside spot at home.

× No, I'm not that picture perfectionist, but I really like to enjoy the view in person rather than taking a picture.

✓ No, I'm not that much of a perfectionist about pictures, but I really prefer enjoying the view in person rather than taking a picture.

Incorrect adjective phrase and word order: 'that picture perfectionist' is unnatural. Use 'that much of a perfectionist about pictures' or 'that picture-perfect' depending on meaning. Also 'like to enjoy' is acceptable but 'prefer enjoying' fits better with the contrast. Suggestion: restructure the phrase to 'that much of a perfectionist about pictures' and use 'prefer' to show the contrast.

× But to for sure as a memory, I like to take a picture, yeah.

✓ But to be sure, as a memory, I like to take a picture.

Unnecessary words and incorrect verb form: 'to for sure' is ungrammatical. Use the infinitive 'to be sure' to express certainty. Keep the verb 'take' (base form) after 'like' or use 'I like taking a picture' for the -ing form. Suggestion: use 'to be sure' and either 'I like to take a picture' or 'I like taking a picture.'

× In my opinion the rural areas views are most beautiful than the urban areas because the nature and scenario of urban areas is really peaceful.

✓ In my opinion, views in rural areas are more beautiful than those in urban areas because the natural scenery in rural areas is really peaceful.

Multiple issues: incorrect preposition and word order 'rural areas views' should be 'views in rural areas.' Comparative form error uses 'most ... than' which is wrong; use 'more ... than.' 'Scenario' is wrong word; use 'scenery.' Also subject reference confusing—'those in urban areas' clarifies comparison. Suggestion: use 'views in rural areas are more beautiful than those in urban areas' and 'natural scenery.'

× You get a peace but in urban areas it's very noisy and too much traffic so I really don't like.

✓ You get peace in rural areas, but urban areas are very noisy and have too much traffic, so I really don't like them.

Conjunction and sentence structure issues: 'You get a peace' is incorrect—use 'You get peace.' Need contrast coordinated with 'but' and proper clause for urban areas. 'Too much traffic' needs a verb: 'have too much traffic.' The sentence ends with no object—'I really don't like them' clarifies what is disliked. Suggestion: use parallel structure and include appropriate verbs and pronouns.

× Views are everywhere in the world, whether it's my country or the foreign country, but I enjoy every view from where I get peace and no hustle bustle and get away from the traffic and noisy environment of the.

✓ Views are everywhere in the world, whether in my country or in a foreign country, but I enjoy any view where I can find peace and escape the hustle and bustle, traffic, and noisy environment.

Preposition and article errors: use 'in my country' and 'in a foreign country.' Phrase 'from where I get peace' is awkward—use 'where I can find peace' or 'that let me find peace.' 'No hustle bustle' should be 'the hustle and bustle.' Sentence fragment 'environment of the.' is incomplete and ungrammatical; remove trailing 'of the.' Suggestion: simplify to 'any view where I can find peace and escape the hustle and bustle, traffic, and noisy environment.'