Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar while keeping natural flow. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce repetition and fix common errors (articles, prepositions, plural forms). Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I do. Photographing beautiful scenery is my favorite hobby because it helps me relax and connect with nature. I also enjoy sharing the best shots on social media to tell a short story to my friends and family.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first and avoid filler words. Clarify the distinction between urban and rural preferences with specific reasons and one linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'because'). Keep it to two or three sentences and correct awkward phrases.

Example: It depends on my mood. If I'm cheerful I prefer urban views because I like the vibrant streets and architecture; however, when I want peace I choose rural scenes for their calm atmosphere.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct word choice and grammar. Replace incorrect words ('fuels', 'with my voice') and organize reasons with linking words like 'first' and 'second'. Be specific about what 'connected' means (culture, memories) and mention cost briefly.

Example: I prefer views in my own country. First, I feel more connected to the places because of my cultural background and memories; second, visiting local sites is cheaper and easier than travelling abroad.

× Absolutely. Taking pictures of beautiful scenery is my favorite hobby.

✓ Absolutely. Taking pictures of beautiful scenery is my favorite hobby.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. 'Taking' correctly functions as a gerund (verb + -ing) used as the subject of the sentence.

× I love to capture moments and to put a story on the social media to share with my friends and my family.

✓ I love to capture moments and to post stories on social media to share with my friends and family.

Use 'post' instead of 'put' for sharing content online and 'social media' without 'the'. 'Stories' plural fits typical usage. Remove the extra 'my' before family for natural English.

× I think it's the relaxing way to me to put myself in the nature and taking pictures is one of the thing that I love to.

✓ I think it's a relaxing way for me to be in nature, and taking pictures is one of the things that I love.

Use 'a relaxing way' not 'the relaxing way' unless a specific one is meant. Use 'for me' not 'to me' for purpose. 'Be in nature' is standard; drop 'the'. Change 'one of the thing' to 'one of the things' to match plural. End with 'I love' rather than 'I love to' for natural phrasing.

× MMM, Well, it entirely depends on my mood.

✓ Well, it entirely depends on my mood.

Remove filler 'MMM' in formal responses. Sentence itself is correct present-tense; no tense change required.

× If I am in a happy mood, I will definitely prefer to view urban areas or rural areas.

✓ If I am in a happy mood, I will definitely prefer urban or rural areas.

'Prefer to view' is awkward; use 'prefer urban or rural areas' or 'prefer visiting'. Also avoid repeating 'areas' twice for conciseness.

× But uh, if I'm not in a good mood or I have a stuff that I really want to wind up, so I don't prefer to go to view these areas.

✓ But if I'm not in a good mood or I have something I really need to finish, I don't prefer to visit those areas.

Replace 'a stuff' with 'something'. 'Wind up' is informal/unclear; 'finish' is clearer. Use 'prefer to visit' or 'prefer visiting' instead of 'prefer to go to view'. Use 'those areas' to refer back properly. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'so'.

× So yeah, it entirely depends.

✓ So yeah, it entirely depends.

Sentence is correct in present tense; no change needed.

× Well, I prefer fuels in my own country or rather than other countries because first thing is that I'm connected to my country and with my voice and the second thing it is more cheaper than to travel to another country or to have look the beautiful.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because, firstly, I'm connected to my country and its culture, and secondly, it's cheaper than traveling to another country or seeing beautiful places elsewhere.

Replace 'fuels' with 'views'. Use 'rather than in other countries' for comparison. Rephrase 'first thing is that I'm connected to my country and with my voice' to 'I'm connected to my country and its culture' for clarity. Use 'cheaper' without 'more'. 'Traveling' and 'seeing beautiful places' are clearer than 'have look the beautiful'. Add connectors 'firstly' and 'secondly' for structure.