Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct first, then give concise supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Correct verb tenses, articles and word order, avoid redundancy. Aim for 2–4 sentences: one topic sentence saying you like taking pictures, then 1–2 specific supporting details (when, where, why) using linking words (for example, last weekend I went to...).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, last weekend I went to a hill station called Binsar and took photos of the sunrise and the valley, because I love capturing natural colours and wide landscapes.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give specific reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Fix grammar (use singular/plural correctly, avoid repetition) and use more precise vocabulary (mountains, scenery, landscapes). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural areas because they offer dramatic landscapes and mountain views. For example, I often photograph rolling hills and forested valleys, which I find more inspiring than city skylines.

Suggestion: Give a clear, single preference or explain a balanced view with a linked reason. Correct pronouns and articles (live -> lived; the India -> India; remove repeated words). Use linking phrases (however, because, since) to explain why you like both. Keep it to 2–3 coherent sentences.

Example: I enjoy views in both my home country and abroad. For instance, I grew up in India and love its colourful landscapes, but after moving to Canada I also began to appreciate its vast lakes and forests.

× Actually there is a many people who like to take pictures, but sometimes I go outside, like go on vacations.

✓ Actually there are many people who like to take pictures, but sometimes I go out, for example, on vacation.

The phrase 'there is a many people' incorrectly uses 'there is' with a plural noun. Use 'there are' for plural subjects. 'Go outside, like go on vacations' is awkward: 'go out' is more natural, and 'on vacation' (uncountable) is usual; use 'for example' to show illustration. Suggestions: use 'there are' with plural nouns; use 'go out' or 'go on vacation' instead of 'go outside, like go on vacations'.

× On last weekend I go to Bisler.

✓ Last weekend I went to Bisler.

The sentence refers to a past event but uses present tense 'go'. Use the past simple 'went' for completed actions in the past and omit 'on' before 'last weekend' (native usage: 'last weekend'). Suggestion: use past simple for finished past events: 'I went'.

× So yeah, I like pictures, click pictures of beautiful views.

✓ So yeah, I like taking pictures of beautiful views.

Using two verbs 'like pictures, click pictures' is ungrammatical. Use 'like taking pictures' where 'taking' is the gerund following 'like'. Suggestion: follow verbs of preference with gerund: 'I like taking pictures.'.

× Mostly I prefer to go rural areas because there is there is too much views of mountains and sceneries.

✓ Mostly I prefer to go to rural areas because there are many views of mountains and scenery.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go' and double 'there is there is'. Use 'there are' for plural 'views'. 'Too much views' is incorrect: use 'many views' for countable nouns. 'Sceneries' is rarely plural; use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun. Suggestion: include 'to' with 'go to', use 'there are' for plural, use 'many' with count nouns, and use 'scenery'.

× So yeah, I took pictures of that views and I like these areas because it's a attract me too much.

✓ So yeah, I took pictures of those views and I like these areas because they attract me a lot.

'That views' is incorrect demonstrative for plural; use 'those views'. 'It's a attract me too much' has multiple errors: 'it's a' is wrong, subject should be 'they' referring to areas, verb 'attract' must agree, and adverb phrase should be 'a lot' rather than 'too much' in this context. Suggestion: use correct demonstratives ('those' for plural), ensure subject-verb agreement ('they attract'), and prefer 'a lot' for positive emphasis.

× Actually I prefer views in in my country and other country because first time I live in the India.

✓ Actually I prefer views in my country and in other countries because at first I lived in India.

Repeated 'in in' and missing plural for 'other countries' when speaking generally. 'First time I live in the India' has tense and article errors: use past 'lived' for past residence, 'at first' to indicate initial situation, and do not use 'the' before country names like 'India'. Suggestion: avoid double prepositions, use plural when generalizing, use past tense for past residence, and omit 'the' before most country names.

× So after that I came to Canada then because then I now I like to see views in Canada.

✓ After that I came to Canada, and now I like to see views in Canada.

The original mixes past and temporal markers incorrectly and has redundant words 'then because then I now I'. Use past simple 'came' for the move, and 'now' with present simple 'like' to describe current preference. Remove redundant conjunctions. Suggestion: sequence events with past tense for past actions and present tense for current states; avoid repeated words like 'then' and 'I'.