Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is slightly long and contains a few grammatical slips and redundancies. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, fixing grammar (e.g., 'enjoy the view' → 'enjoy the view,' 'eye-catching scenery' is fine, 'rest as a mementos' → 'the rest as mementos'), and adding one brief specific reason or example. Use a linking word if adding detail.

Example: I don't usually take many photos; I prefer to sit and enjoy the view. However, if something is eye-catching—like a beach sunset—I will take a couple of pictures: one to share on social media and a few more as mementos.

Suggestion: Good structure: clear topic sentence with supporting details and a contrast. To improve, vary vocabulary (use 'coastal' or 'countryside' instead of repeating 'rural') and add a brief specific contrast example. Include a linking word like 'however' to make the contrast smoother.

Example: I prefer coastal and countryside views because I enjoy natural surroundings and fresh air; for example, watching a sunset on the beach is very relaxing. However, cities, despite having cultural attractions, often feel too crowded and noisy for me.

Suggestion: The answer addresses the question but has grammar errors and awkward phrasing ('doesn't stop me to go abroad' should be 'doesn't stop me from going abroad'; 'broaden my insights, my experience' is repetitive). Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add a concise specific reason or example of what you learn when visiting abroad. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I think my country has many beautiful views, but that doesn't stop me from travelling abroad to explore different landscapes. For example, visiting mountains in another country taught me new hiking routes and gave me fresh perspectives on nature.

× 'Generally I don't take pictures, I prefer to sit down and relax enjoying the view but if I see an eye-catching scenery I will take a couple of pictures such as sunsets by the beach.'

✓ 'Generally, I don't take pictures; I prefer to sit down and relax, enjoying the view, but if I see an eye-catching scene I will take a couple of pictures, such as sunsets by the beach.'

'Sentence structure errors: The original is a run-on with comma splices and awkward phrase order. Add punctuation to separate independent clauses, insert commas around the participial phrase enjoying the view, and use scene instead of the uncountable count noun scenery in this context. Suggestion: use a semicolon or period between independent clauses, set off participial phrases with commas, and choose correct noun forms.'

× 'Perhaps one to post on my social media for my friends and rest as a mementos for me.'

✓ 'Perhaps one to post on my social media for my friends and the rest as mementos for me.'

'Article errors: The phrase used an incorrect article and incorrect singular/plural noun agreement. Use the definite article the before rest to refer back to the remaining pictures, and change a mementos to mementos (remove the extra article and match plural). Suggestion: ensure articles agree with countable noun number and referential context.'

× 'eye-catching scenery'

✓ 'eye-catching scene'

'Singular and plural issue: Scenery is an uncountable noun and typically not modified by a numeral or the adjective in this way; scene fits the intended meaning of a single view. Suggestion: use countable noun scene when referring to a single visual subject.'

× 'Well, technically my country has the best views of the environment, but that doesn't stop me to go abroad to visit other countries and explore more to broaden my insights, my experience.'

✓ 'Well, technically my country has the best views, but that doesn't stop me from going abroad to visit other countries and explore more to broaden my insights and my experience.'

'Present tense issue and preposition/gerund form: The verb pattern after stop requires a preposition + gerund (stop someone from doing something). Use from going (gerund) rather than to go. Also remove the awkward phrase of the environment and connect ideas more naturally. Suggestion: learn verb patterns that require gerunds after prepositions and use from + -ing for stop.'

× 'broaden my insights, my experience'

✓ 'broaden my insights and my experience'

'Incorrect use of prepositions/coordination: Using a comma to join two noun phrases is incorrect coordination. Replace the comma with and to clearly link the two objects. Suggestion: use conjunctions to join coordinate elements.'