Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct some grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "used to" repeated).

Example: I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountain lakes and coastal scenes because I enjoy capturing calm water and expansive skies, which create a peaceful mood in photos.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, be specific about reasons and use linking words. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., "news in Uri area") with 'rural areas' and avoid repeating 'people'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural areas because there are fewer people and more natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing green fields and quiet night views, which let me focus on landscapes rather than people.

Suggestion: Give a clearer topic sentence and add a brief specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'they are real.'

Example: I don't have a strong preference between my country and others because every place has its own beauty. For example, I photograph local historical streets at home and coastal landscapes abroad because each location offers different colors and textures.

× Yes, I absolutely love to take pictures of different views, especially the oceans or the grand area or the places that I used to like I used to go, and especially the mountain views with the lake. I definitely love taking those pictures.

✓ Yes, I absolutely love taking pictures of different views, especially of the ocean, wide landscapes, places I used to go to, and especially mountain views with lakes. I definitely love taking those pictures.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund (verb + -ing) when describing hobbies or preferences. Use 'taking' instead of 'to take' for natural phrasing. Use singular 'ocean' or 'the ocean' for general reference and 'landscapes' or 'wide landscapes' instead of 'grand area'. 'Places I used to go to' requires the preposition 'to' at the end. Use plural 'lakes' if referring to lakes in general or 'a lake' if specific. Improve word order and word choice for clarity.

× I definitely prefer a news in Uri area because there are less people in there and I can take the nature to put photos.

✓ I definitely prefer a more rural area because there are fewer people there and I can photograph nature.

'A news in Uri area' is incorrect — likely meant 'a rural area' or 'the countryside'. Use 'fewer' with countable nouns ('people'), not 'less'. Omit unnecessary prepositions: 'there' is sufficient; do not say 'in there'. 'Take the nature to put photos' is ungrammatical; use 'photograph nature' or 'take photos of nature'.

× A picture of the nature and not the people.

✓ I prefer pictures of nature rather than pictures of people.

'The nature' is unnatural in English; use 'nature' without 'the'. Also make the subject clear and parallel: 'pictures of nature rather than pictures of people.' This corrects pronoun/determiner misuse and improves parallel structure.

× I do not like to take the picture people or the people in it.

✓ I do not like to take pictures of people or have people in my photos.

Original sentence has incorrect word order ('picture people') and unclear phrasing. Use the verb 'take' with 'pictures of people' and clarify 'have people in my photos' for the meaning that people appear in the images. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I rather take a picture of the night view with a green area or any.

✓ I would rather take a picture of a night view with green surroundings or something similar.

Use 'would rather' to express preference. 'Night view' needs an article 'a'. 'Green area' is better phrased as 'green surroundings' or 'green area', and 'or any' is vague; replace with 'or something similar.' This fixes incorrect modal preference expression and adjective usage.

× As for me, and I have no favorite, whether it's this country or the country, I love every country and they are real because they have their own beauty in it.

✓ As for me, I have no favorite; whether it is my country or another country, I love every country because each has its own beauty.

Remove the extraneous conjunction 'and' after the comma. Use semicolon or comma plus conjunction for clause separation. 'Whether it's this country or the country' is unclear; replace with 'whether it is my country or another country.' 'They are real' is irrelevant and ungrammatical; omit it. Use 'each has its own beauty' instead of 'they have their own beauty in it.' This corrects pronoun reference, subject-verb agreement, and clarity.

× So I love taking the view of any country.

✓ So I love photographing views in any country.

Use the gerund 'photographing' or phrase 'love taking photos of' — 'taking the view' is unnatural. 'Views in any country' is clearer than 'the view of any country.' This corrects verb form and improves collocation and clarity.