Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors; begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and give one specific supporting detail or example using a linking word. Also correct pronoun agreement (use "its" not "their").

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each angle reveals unique beauty. For example, when I photograph a seaside sunset, the changing light highlights textures and colors that I wouldn’t notice otherwise.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and fix grammar (use plural or articles: "urban areas" or "an urban area"). Remove filler words and add a specific reason with a linking word such as "because" or "for example". Mention a concrete detail about buildings or lighting to enrich the answer.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I love the architecture and nighttime lighting. For example, skyscrapers with illuminated facades create dramatic reflections on rivers that I find visually striking.

Suggestion: Avoid overly negative or vague statements and reduce fillers. Give a clear, polite topic sentence and support it with specific and constructive reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Instead of saying "dirty" broadly, mention particular aspects like "lack of green space" or "poor urban planning" and offer a brief example.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I often find better urban planning and cleaner public spaces. For example, cities I’ve visited abroad tend to have well-maintained parks and pedestrian-friendly streets, which make the views more pleasant.

× Yes, I like taking pictures and different views because I think every angle has a very unique value. Uh, it has their own beauty.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think every angle has a very unique value. It has its own beauty.

Original contains incorrect pronoun reference: 'it has their own beauty' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'their'. Also 'taking pictures and different views' is unclear; use 'taking pictures of different views'. Use 'it has its own beauty' for singular 'every angle' or 'each angle has its own beauty'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent with their antecedents and match singular/plural (e.g., 'each angle has its own beauty').

× I prefer the view in urban area because I really like the view of the building, especially at night because it, uh, shows the beauty of the city light.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I really like the sight of buildings, especially at night, because they show the beauty of the city lights.

Errors: 'the view in urban area' should be plural or countable: 'views in urban areas' or 'the view in an urban area'. 'the view of the building' is awkward; use plural 'sight of buildings' or 'views of buildings'. Pronoun agreement: 'it...shows' mismatches plural 'buildings' so change to 'they show'. Also 'city light' should be plural 'city lights'. Suggestion: match singular/plural consistently and use natural collocations ('sight of buildings', 'city lights').

× I prefer the view in other countries because, uh, the view in my country is uh, a little bit dirty and uh, uh, the city placement is not good enough rather than the other countries.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because the views in my country are a little bit dirty and the city's layout is not as good as in other countries.

Problems: preposition and comparison errors. 'the view in other countries' is okay but keep plural 'views'. 'the view in my country is...dirty' requires plural agreement: 'views...are'. 'the city placement' is unnatural; use 'the city's layout' or 'urban planning'. 'not good enough rather than the other countries' is incorrect comparison; use 'not as good as in other countries'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure 'not as good as', choose correct prepositions ('in my country', 'in other countries'), and use natural collocations like 'city layout' or 'urban planning'.