Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear, direct answer first (yes or no), then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use simple correct sentences and link ideas with short connectors like “because” or “so”. Pronunciation and word choice should be clearer (e.g., say “I like taking pictures” instead of “Go to”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to capture colours and mood.

Suggestion: Start with a direct preference (I prefer ...). Explain why with one or two clear reasons and use linking words like “because” or “so”. Use correct noun phrases (e.g., “urban areas” not “using urban areas”) and concise expressions (e.g., “modern architecture” instead of “new city development”).

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and the variety of street scenes. For instance, I like photographing tall buildings, busy markets, and colourful graffiti.

Suggestion: Answer directly (I prefer ...), then give clear, specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like “mind flashing.” Use precise descriptions of what you like (e.g., “green spaces, peaceful countryside, familiar culture”). Keep sentences short and linked with “because” or “so”.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has many green spaces and peaceful landscapes that help me relax. For example, I love photographing local parks and quiet villages where I feel comfortable and stress-free.

× Go to. I see around as to me and I learning to others.

✓ No, I don't. I look around and learn from others.

Original has multiple sentence structure and word choice errors: 'Go to' is incorrect and unclear; subject and verbs are missing or wrong. 'I see around as to me' is ungrammatical; use 'I look around' to express observing. 'I learning to others' uses wrong verb form and preposition; correct to 'learn from others' (present simple to state a general habit). Use present simple for general likes/dislikes. Suggest practicing simple subject-verb-object sentences and correct verb forms: 'I look', 'I learn'. Use 'from' after 'learn'.

× I prefer using urban areas because it has a new city development and taking a new things taking a pictures.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they have new developments and interesting things to photograph.

Errors: 'prefer using urban areas' is awkward — use 'prefer urban areas'. 'it has' is wrong because 'urban areas' is plural; use 'they have' (subject-verb agreement). 'a new city development' is better as 'new developments' for natural phrasing. 'taking a new things taking a pictures' contains incorrect verb forms and prepositions; correct to 'interesting things to photograph'. Use plural agreement and the infinitive 'to photograph' to express purpose. Practice subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions/verb patterns.

× I prefer using my own country because it has a lot of greenery and it has to mind flashing and stress free.

✓ I prefer my own country because it has a lot of greenery and helps me relax and reduce stress.

Problems: 'prefer using my own country' is unnatural; 'prefer my own country' is correct. 'it has to mind flashing' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meant 'it clears my mind' or 'it helps me relax'. 'stress free' needs a verb phrase: 'reduces stress' or 'is stress-free'. I corrected to 'helps me relax and reduce stress' for clarity. Suggest using clear verbs ('helps', 'reduces') and idiomatic phrases ('clears my mind', 'relax', 'stress-free').