Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. “living in the moment”), avoid fillers and repetitions, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like living in the moment. For example, when I travel I photograph sunsets and city skylines to remember how a place felt. This helps me preserve memories and notice small details I might otherwise miss.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, fix grammar and sentence flow, and use linking words to add a brief, specific reason or example. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid sentence fragments.

Example: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy being outdoors and nature relaxes me. For instance, every weekend I hike to lakes or hills, and the peaceful scenery helps me clear my mind and forget daily stresses.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (plural forms and verb agreement), and add a brief explanation using a linking word to compare. Be specific about what you like to see abroad.

Example: Both are appealing, but I prefer exploring views in other countries because they offer landscapes I haven't seen. For example, I enjoy visiting coastal areas abroad to experience different styles of architecture and natural scenery that broaden my perspective.

× I'd love to take pictures of different views because I think live in the moment is the most important thing when being a human being.

✓ I'd love to take pictures of different views because I think living in the moment is the most important thing about being human.

Use the present participle 'living' after 'think' to express an ongoing concept; 'live in the moment' as a noun phrase requires 'living in the moment'. Also replace 'when being a human being' with 'about being human' for natural phrasing and conciseness. Grammar problem type ID:10

× So that's kind of interesting to, to, to recording the moments, yes.

✓ So that's kind of interesting to me, to record the moments, yes.

After 'interesting' the correct structure is 'interesting to [someone]' or use the base form 'to record' rather than the gerund 'recording' here. Remove filler repetitions and add 'me' as the experiencer. Use infinitive 'to record' to express purpose or interest. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I prefer rural areas because I'm an outdoor person when every weekends I go to natural spots to see the astonishing views would make me feel clean and reset my mind.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I'm an outdoor person; every weekend I go to natural spots to see the astonishing views that make me feel refreshed and reset my mind.

Replace 'every weekends' with singular 'every weekend' (preposition/quantifier and number agreement). Remove 'when' which incorrectly connects clauses; use a semicolon or separate sentence. Change 'would make' to present 'make' because this is a habitual action. Use 'refreshed' instead of 'clean' for natural English. Also add 'that' to introduce the relative clause correctly. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer rural areas because I'm an outdoor person when every weekends I go to natural spots to see the astonishing views would make me feel clean and reset my mind.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I'm an outdoor person; every weekend I go to natural spots to see the astonishing views that make me feel refreshed and reset my mind.

'Every weekends' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun: 'every weekend'. Also ensure verbs agree with the plural noun 'views' by using 'make'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I think the views in my country is really good, but I like to explore other countries view that I've never seen before.

✓ I think the views in my country are really good, but I like to explore views in other countries that I've never seen before.

Subject-verb agreement: use plural verb 'are' to match plural subject 'views'. Also 'other countries view' is incorrect; use 'views in other countries' or 'other countries' views'. Ensure 'that I've never seen before' modifies 'views'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I think the views in my country is really good, but I like to explore other countries view that I've never seen before.

✓ I think the views in my country are really good, but I like to explore views in other countries that I've never seen before.

Using 'really good' is acceptable but can be improved to 'are very nice' or 'are great' for register; more importantly, adjective agreement and placement must fit plural noun. Rephrase to 'views in other countries' for correct modifier order. Grammar problem type ID:13