Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is informative and relevant, but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. recently graduated), then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrases like “I am hoping to” twice and refine word choice (e.g. “physiotherapist” not “doctor of physiotherapist”).

Example: I recently graduated from Superior University with a degree in physiotherapy. I’m planning to move abroad to gain further qualifications and clinical experience before pursuing postgraduate study.

Suggestion: Your answer answers the question but is filled with hesitations and repeats the same information. Give a concise chronological statement with clear terms and reduce fillers (uh, umm). Use linking words (before, then) but keep it brief and precise.

Example: I studied at Superior College where I completed the FSCP medical course, and then I progressed to Superior University to complete my degree in physiotherapy.

Suggestion: Good clear response with specific details. Improve coherence by using linking words and sentence variety; avoid listing without structure. You can add one brief reason why these facilities matter to students.

Example: Yes, it’s a good place to study because it has a comfortable library, well-equipped labs and spacious, air-conditioned classrooms. In addition, there are three cafés and a bookshop, which make campus life convenient for students.

Suggestion: Your idea is clear but the answer is disorganized and has many hesitations and grammar mistakes. State your opinion directly, give a specific reason, and suggest a practical solution. Use linking words (because, so) and correct phrasing (free drinking water, the canteen is expensive).

Example: Overall the facilities are fine, but I would like free drinking water on campus. Currently we have to buy water from the canteen, which is expensive for many students, so they should install water fountains or a filtered water system.

Suggestion: The intention is clear but the answer contains hesitations, grammar errors and unclear terminology (use 'neurorehabilitation' and 'neurorehabilitation specialist'). Give a concise plan: study abroad, gain experience, then return and specialise. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing.

Example: As I said, I plan to study abroad to gain clinical experience and advanced training in neurorehabilitation. After I return, I hope to work as a specialist in neurorehabilitation to help patients in my country.

× Currently I am free, but I have recently completed my graduation from Superior University as a doctor of physiotherapist and I am hoping to move abroad for improving my credentials and for my higher studies.

✓ Currently I am free, but I recently completed my degree in physiotherapy at Superior University and I hope to move abroad to improve my credentials and pursue higher studies.

This sentence has awkward word order and incorrect collocations ('completed my graduation', 'doctor of physiotherapist', 'for improving', 'for my higher studies'). Use 'completed my degree in X' and 'hope to move abroad to improve' for correct English. Keep tenses consistent: 'recently completed' (present perfect can be used, but simple past 'recently completed' fits spoken context). Use 'pursue higher studies' for natural phrasing.

× I have uh, completed my graduation from Superior University.

✓ I have, uh, completed my degree at Superior University.

'Completed my graduation' is nonstandard; native usage is 'completed my degree' or 'graduated from'. Also 'from Superior University' is acceptable but 'at Superior University' is more natural for 'completed my degree at'. Keep filler 'uh' as spoken but place commas correctly.

× Before that I was uh, student of Superior college and uh, I did umm, FSCP medical.

✓ Before that I was, uh, a student at Superior College, and I completed FSc Pre-Medical.

Missing article 'a' before 'student' (article error) and wrong preposition 'of' should be 'at'. 'FSCP medical' is unclear; likely 'FSc Pre-Medical'. Use 'completed' for studies.

× Then I got admission in umm, Superior University, uh, in degree of uh, physiotherapy.

✓ Then I got admission to Superior University in the physiotherapy degree program.

Use 'admission to' not 'admission in'. 'in degree of physiotherapy' is incorrect; use 'in the physiotherapy degree program' or 'for a degree in physiotherapy'.

× Yes, it has many opportunities for students like comfortable library, labs and spacious classroom with air conditioners.

✓ Yes, it has many facilities for students, such as a comfortable library, labs, and spacious classrooms with air conditioning.

'Opportunities' is the wrong noun; 'facilities' fits. Need articles: 'a comfortable library', plural 'classrooms'. 'air conditioners' is better as 'air conditioning' when describing rooms. Also use 'such as' to introduce examples.

× And there are three cafes and a bookshop.

✓ There are also three cafés and a bookshop.

This is mostly correct; adjust word order and add 'also' for flow. Use acute accent optional for 'cafés' and keep it one sentence with prior sentence if desired.

× It is a good place for us.

✓ It is a good place for students.

'For us' is vague; specify the group 'students' for clarity. Pronoun reference should be clear.

× Uh, basically everything was enough, but there is a note, uh, free of cost water for students.

✓ Basically everything was sufficient, but there is an issue: free water for students.

'Enough' is awkward with 'everything'; 'sufficient' is better. 'There is a note' is incorrect; likely 'there is an issue' or 'a problem'. 'Free of cost water' should be 'free water' or 'free drinking water'.

× We always bought it from canteen in which quite expensive for us to both water again and again from the cafe.

✓ We always bought water from the canteen, which was quite expensive for us to buy again and again from the café.

Sentence has multiple structure problems: tense consistency ('bought' vs general habit—use 'buy'), missing articles, and awkward phrasing 'to both water'. Correct version clarifies that buying water repeatedly was expensive.

× So they should be planned our water system.

✓ So they should plan a water system for us.

Incorrect verb form 'should be planned' (passive) and incorrect word order. Use 'should plan' (modal + base verb) and 'a water system for us' to express suggestion. This matches Grammar Problem Type 8 (verb + -ing) loosely but also sentence structure; chosen as verb form issue.

× Umm as I mentioned before, I am hoping to move abroad for my higher study.

✓ As I mentioned before, I hope to move abroad for my higher studies.

'I am hoping' is acceptable but 'I hope' is more direct and fits spoken responses. 'Higher study' should be plural 'higher studies'. Maintain present tense for plans that are intentions.

× Uh I I will get some experience from abroad and study as a neuro rehabilitation after came back.

✓ I will gain some experience abroad and study neurorehabilitation after I come back.

Tense and word order errors: 'get experience from abroad' should be 'gain experience abroad'. 'study as a neuro rehabilitation' is incorrect; 'study neurorehabilitation' is correct. Use future ('I will') then simple present for sequence with 'after I come back' or 'after I return'.

× I serve my nation as a physiotherapist or neutrally habitationist.

✓ I will serve my country as a physiotherapist or a neurorehabilitation specialist.

'Serve my nation' is acceptable but 'country' is more natural; 'neutrally habitationist' is garbled. Likely intended 'neurorehabilitation specialist'. Add article 'a' before professions and use correct noun form.