Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời không đúng câu hỏi của giám khảo và cấu trúc câu của bạn cũng sai ngữ pháp. Cần lắng nghe kỹ câu hỏi trước khi trả lời, đảm bảo trả lời liên quan trực tiếp. Khi trả lời, dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (ví dụ: “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”), sau đó cung cấp 1–2 câu bổ sung cụ thể để giải thích. Chú ý ngữ pháp như “when I was a child” (thêm ‘a’), và động từ chia phù hợp.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which I rode to school and around my neighborhood almost every day.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng bị sai (ví dụ: "doesn't" thay cho "don't/doesn't think bikes are", "by" thay "bikes", "countries" số nhiều). Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp trước (Yes/No/It depends), sau đó giải thích với lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (because, however, so). Tránh tiếng lúng túng (uh) và giữ tối đa 3 câu bổ sung, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (economy, environment, convenience, public transport).

Example: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays because many people prefer motorbikes and cars. Additionally, better public transport and rising incomes make motor vehicles more convenient than cycling for most people.

× Did you have a bag when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'bag' instead of 'bike' which changes meaning; also omitted the article 'a' before 'child'. Use 'a child' for singular countable noun. Suggestion: pay attention to vocabulary and include articles with singular nouns (e.g., 'a child').

× Uh, to be more precise, I doesn't think by is, uh, popular in my countries as now.

✓ Uh, to be more precise, I don't think bikes are popular in my country now.

Errors: 'doesn't' with subject I is incorrect — use 'don't'; 'by is' seems to be mistaken for 'bikes are'; 'countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own nation; word order and redundancy 'as now' should be 'now'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary for subject-verb agreement (I + do not), ensure plural/singular noun forms match meaning (bike/bikes, country), and simplify time expressions (use 'now').

× Now today, the, the economic and the environment, uh, increased day by day, so make device less convenient.

✓ Nowadays, the economy and the environment are changing day by day, which makes bicycles less convenient.

Problems: 'Now today' is redundant — use 'Nowadays'; 'the economic and the environment' is ungrammatical and wrong word forms — use 'the economy and the environment'; 'increased day by day' doesn't fit meaning for economy/environment — use 'are changing day by day'; missing correct verb agreement and connector — 'which makes bicycles less convenient'. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns ('economy' not 'economic'), correct verb forms and agreement ('are changing'), and use relative clauses to show cause ('which makes...').