Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 간결하게 대답한 점은 좋습니다. 하지만 답변이 너무 짧고 추가 설명이 없어 점수가 낮습니다. 질문에 대해 주제 문장으로 답한 뒤, 이유나 간단한 예시로 응답을 확장하세요. 연결어(예: because, so, however)를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어주고 문장 수는 2~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Example: No, I didn't. I never owned a bike because our family lived in a busy city where cycling felt unsafe. Instead, I usually walked or took public transport to school, which was more convenient for my parents.

Suggestion: 의견을 제시한 것은 좋지만 이유가 피상적이고 구체성이 부족합니다. 의견(주제 문장) → 구체적인 이유 또는 비교 → 결과나 예시 순으로 말하세요. 연결어(for example, therefore, because)를 사용해 논리적으로 전개하고 어휘에 변화를 주어 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Example: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars and public transport. For example, cities often lack safe bike lanes, so people feel it's inconvenient or unsafe to cycle, which reduces bike ownership.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country because a lot of people don't have a bike.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because many people don't have bikes.

The original sentence has a mismatch in number and natural phrasing. 'A lot of people don't have a bike' is grammatical but sounds less natural when discussing general availability; use plural 'bikes' to match 'a lot of people' and maintain consistency. Also, the front clause 'I think bikes are not popular' is less natural than 'I don't think bikes are popular.' Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for slightly more formal clarity. Suggestions: 1) Keep plural agreement between people and the items they possess (people... bikes). 2) Prefer 'I don't think...' for negative opinion statements. 3) Use 'many' or 'a lot of' consistently with plural nouns.