Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문법과 시제 사용을 바로잡아야 합니다. 과거 사실을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 문장은 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 장소를 말할 때 전치사 사용(near/next to/from 등)을 정확히 하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하며 문장을 간결하게 유지하세요. 또한 공원 이름이 이상하게 들리므로 실제 이름을 정확히 말하거나 ‘a park called ...’ 구조를 명확히 하세요.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it twice a week in a park called "You Don't Park". The park is near Science Station, so it was easy to get there.

Suggestion: 의미 전달이 불명확하므로 문장 구조와 어휘 선택을 개선해야 합니다. 일반화할 때는 근거를 제시하고, 연결어(to show contrast or reason)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 하세요. ‘policy like cold starting’ 같은 표현은 의미가 모호하므로 구체적으로 어떤 정책(예: bike-sharing programs, cycling lanes, safety campaigns)을 말하는지 명확히 하십시오.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country. For example, many people, especially my friends, use bikes for short trips, and local governments are promoting cycling with new bike-sharing programs and dedicated bike lanes.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'have' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for habits or possession in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× When I was a child I ride a bike twice a week in the park called You Don't Park.

✓ When I was a child I rode a bike twice a week in the park called You Don't Park.

The sentence describes a habitual action in the past, so the main verb must be in past simple. 'Ride' is present; change to past participle form 'rode' (past simple of 'ride'). Suggestion: for past habits use past simple (subject + past verb), e.g., 'I rode a bike twice a week.'

× It is located from science station.

✓ It is located near Science Station.

'Located from' is incorrect. Use appropriate prepositions of place such as 'near', 'next to', or 'by' and capitalize proper nouns. Also 'science station' should be 'Science Station' as a proper name. Suggestion: choose 'near' to indicate proximity: 'It is located near Science Station.'

× Yes, I think by our bikes are popular in my country especially these days the riding a bike to go somewhere is more popular with my friends.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially these days; riding a bike to go somewhere is more popular among my friends.

The original has incorrect pronoun 'by our' and awkward phrasing. 'By our bikes' is ungrammatical; simply 'bikes' or 'our bikes' would work. Also 'with my friends' is better as 'among my friends' when describing a group. Punctuation and word order are needed for clarity. Suggestion: remove 'by', use 'bikes are popular', and 'among my friends' for groups.

× It has various policy like cold starting.

✓ There are various policies, such as cold-starting.

'It has various policy' misuses singular 'policy' and 'it' unclear; 'There are various policies' is clearer. 'Like' is informal; use 'such as'. 'Cold starting' as a compound noun is better hyphenated or in gerund form 'cold-starting'. Use plural 'policies'. Suggestion: 'There are various policies, such as cold-starting.'